I look back on these years
To see how far I've come and grown,
I take a trip down memory lane,
And what I see has shown ...
That every step I've taken,
You have been there by my side ...
From infancy to adulthood,
We've stood the test of time.
You cradled me and nurtured me,
Through all these many years;
You held me and did comfort me,
Through happiness and tears.
You'd pick me up when I would fall,
You'd dust me off and then,
Encourage me to get back on
That horse and ride again.
Your constant care and loving,
And your warm inviting heart,
Has always been a treasure that
I knew would n'er depart.
If I could be "just half" the person
You have been to me ...
Then you have taught me well dear mom,
For in my heart I see ...
A woman whose most gentle soul,
Embraces me each day ...
A woman whom I dearly love,
Much more than words can say.
2006-11-19 12:14:37 · 12 answers · asked by xxdolphingirl92xx 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
actually, my mom died and i wrote this after she went..i am only 14
2006-11-19 12:22:12 · update #1
Thats really good...very sweet. Your mother will cry when she reads it! Come to think of it...i might copy it, give it my mom, and pass it off as my own...
2006-11-19 12:17:15 · answer #1 · answered by Sara 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
That is a beautiful poem dolphin girl.
I answered a question from you last night about grief and you have sent me two messages. I have been trying to contact you but YA says that your e-mail has not been confirmed. This is nana4dakids. You can send me a message, so send me your e-mail address if you want me to reply to your e-mails.
I am so sorry for you and your brother. I prayed for you last night and I will again tonight. I know it sounds stupid right now but the days will get easier. All you have to do is make it through today. Don't worry about tomorrow until tomorrow.
2006-11-20 15:28:44 · answer #2 · answered by nana4dakids 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is very good!! You really have talent. Your mother would be proud if she could read this. You are really a good writer you put your emotions into the poem and that's a quality that many are unable to accomplish!
U GO GIRL!!
2006-11-20 09:31:54 · answer #3 · answered by askandilltell 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is absolutely wonderful. Your mom is going to adore you for thinking so much of her to transform these precious thoughts into such a beautiful poem. She may even tear up a little. I know she's so blessed to have you for a daughter.
2006-11-19 12:21:20 · answer #4 · answered by soulguy85 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
your poem is beautiful. i am so sorry for your loss. for a 14 year old you seem to show a lot of maturity. thank you for sharing with us.
and keep writing!
2006-11-19 15:40:43 · answer #5 · answered by Bannab 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is a beautiful tribute to your mother. She must be a
wonderful woman!!
2006-11-19 12:19:07 · answer #6 · answered by Bethany 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's sweet and your mother will love it.
2006-11-19 12:17:46 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
beautiful
2006-11-19 12:18:48 · answer #8 · answered by Aneesa S 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Did you write that? I think it's very sweet. :)
2006-11-19 12:18:37 · answer #9 · answered by chickadee 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very good
2006-11-19 12:17:40 · answer #10 · answered by guharamdas 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋