Is my poem good considering I wrote it when I was 10.?

Question

Best friends forever
he stole her away
she said she loved me
just not the same way
i sat down at the court
and remembered old times
such as when we ate all of those limes
do you remember
milk balloon fights
and movie nights
staying up late
and that one date
stealing a kiss here or there
for just that one year
best friends forever
he stole her away
she said she loves me
just not the same way

I was 10 when I wrote this and based it on a show that I love. Please review!!!!

Answer 1

Yes, definitely!! At 10? Hell yeah! Reminds me of myself when I was near that age. My mother kept all the little notes I would write to her, and all of my poems and short stories. I couldn't believe she kept them all. It's so nice to be able to go back in time. Now I'm a college student majoring in English, however I'm going to school to be a general doctor. I always had a passion for writing. Are you a writer now, or planning to be? Ahh, this is nice. Makes me want to call my mom and ask her for those notes, letters, and short stories of mine. =)

Thank you for reminding me.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Like the poem rating 10 you showed your feelings

Answer 4

Good at any age. How could anyone say a person's representing their feelings and thoughts at any stage of life is not good? Add to it you are willing to share it with us.

I will give it a 10, just like your age then.

Answer 5

That is a very good poem, especially if you wrote it when you were 10.

Answer 6

That's very good. The rhyming style is quite unique, different that most I've read. It's a bit free meter, but it flows rather well.

Good Job.

Answer 7

when i was ten my poems proberly sounded like this
My cat
you are so nice
you eat mice
you run around
and are very loud
for a 10 year old that's great, that's good at any age!!^_^
My poem's now are proberly worse,and i'm not 10!!!!!

Answer 8

Very cute poem and I must say great talent at 10... keep it up

Answer 9

Good poem! You wrote it when you were 10? WOW!

Answer 10

I think it's really good... especially for a 10 year old!