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I am completly stumped on what to write in the next section i want it to kind of go back in time to before she was in the bathroom and either switch back and forth or something

2006-11-19 10:36:37 · 1 answers · asked by Zoey 4 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

santa thanks lol ill just post my story again on here.My hand traced the graffiti on the bathroom wall. There were years of love notes, threats, empty promises, and lies. They covered the wall from top to bottom. Each engraving had been carved by different hands different times. I thought of everyone carving a little bit to make it last who they were to write down their memories. Suddenly something caught my eye. My heart raced as I read ELISE <3 s JEREMY It was roughly carved into the wall not enitierly evident,yet it consumed more space than any other etch. As I read it again and again I kept tracing the heart with my finger. Tears swelled up in my eyes and soon my vision was blurred. My head throbbed with old memories, pounding at me like a wave. I was rembering.rembering Elise. Rembering me. I thought I had trained my mind to forget. I shuddered as I sat, and hugged my knees.It seemed as if I was creating a barrier against my own thoughts. I played with the drawstring

2006-11-19 11:46:51 · update #1

on my tan Capri pants. I could not understand why I was more confused than nervous. What was going on with me? Were my memories haunting me still? Why,Why could I not escape this train of thought?

2006-11-19 11:56:21 · update #2

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What are you talking about???
Anyways, I like your first name...Zoey!! Serious!y.

I like it! That is so cool! Yea, I 'm sorta writing a book. In a way. It's wierd though. I can't type it up cuz I don't feel like it. And I don't want anyone to steal it!
But, yea I like it!

2006-11-19 10:43:41 · answer #1 · answered by ☆ Sarah ☆ 4 · 1 1

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