2006-11-19 07:45:13 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
you could say "alot of people drink, alot of people seem to think its cool, but its not so cool when you have to get your stomach pumped or develope liver disease
2006-11-19 07:49:04 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Start it out with : The body was pulled from the waters of the Gulf after 15 hours of searching. Fifteen teens were arrested for underage drinking. The person providing liquor to the beach party faces criminal charges as well as fines as high as $5000.00 plus court costs. I did a persuasive essay on the same subject and got an A. Go for it.
2006-11-19 08:01:23 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There's a couple of ways to start it -- start with an astounding statistic or ask a question (for example: Does your idea of the perfect date end with watching him or her getting handcuffed?). You could also tell a story -- something dramatic about a teenager who drank too much. There are lots of ways to begin. Just make sure you grab your reader's attention with your first sentence.
2006-11-19 07:54:27 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Start with the medical side of the effects of drinking then go from their.
2006-11-19 07:55:24 · answer #4 · answered by Bullz_ eye 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a phenomenal lead. like= how would u like to see some one u love die. .... persuade them to hear u the persuade them to believe in u!;)
GooD luck;)
2006-11-19 07:49:51 · answer #5 · answered by helper 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋