IS THIS SENTENCE CORRECT?
Apparently Hazel knew that the cookies were somewhere in the house, for nothing could go in and out of the house without the Harkers’ Jake’s, the Doberman, permission.
IF THIS IS WRONG< PLEASE TELL ME HOW TO CORRECT IT
2006-11-19 05:40:27 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
It doesn't make sense, so I'd say it's wrong. I THINK this is correct:
Apparently Hazel knew that the cookies were somewhere in the house, for nothing could go in and out of the house without Jake's, the Harkers' Doberman, permission.
Remember, you can take out "the Harkers' Doberman" and the sentence should STILL make sense.
2006-11-19 05:49:50 · answer #1 · answered by Audania 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Apparently Hazel knew that the cookies were somewhere in the house, for nothing could go in and out the house without the Doberman, Harker's Jake's permission.
2006-11-19 13:47:01 · answer #2 · answered by dechey1986 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋