will anyone help the grim reaper 69 ?

Question

by going to my 360 page and looking at my blog's and giving any serious opinions and or constructive critisisum on how to improve it , and what i may or should add to it to make it better ? thank you to all who seriously help ! and 10 points to the best suggestion or opinion !

Answer 1

I like our background. I thought you would be older than 480. lol
You might change your last line. Remove the space between the me & the !. It might let you finish the last exact line.