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Be Good To Feel Good...
If tomorrow never comes, will you be happy about today?
Did you accomplish what you wanted and say what you wanted to say?
Do you have any regrets about just not trying at all?
And did you learn to get back up as quick as you were to fall?
Were you compassionate, kind, and polite to others,
Or are so so shameful, the face on your picture should be covered?
Do unto others as you wish they do unto you,
And you'll be happy about today, just 'cause you were you.

2006-11-19 04:48:11 · 8 answers · asked by Shining Ray of Light 5 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

yes, it's supposed to be are you so shameful, not so so shameful....sorry!

2006-11-19 05:27:14 · update #1

If you'd like to see a couple more samples of my poems, check out myspace.com/angenjaz

2006-11-19 06:16:29 · update #2

8 answers

You like to write poem and I like to write quote, but there is a common between us because we both write about life ^_^ If you have the knowledge to ask those questions then it means that you have woke up from your sleep, which mean you are living with consciousness or awareness. You know what, there was never a single person on earth that was born with a “History” and everybody was asleep from the day they were born and they are still sleeping during their life span, but there will be a day that they will eventually wake up from their sleep; how long it takes? Is depended on how much and what kind of experiences they had in life. Most of the people I know they are still living in the virtual world or wasting their valuable life time, it is because most of them are still playing Game, clubbing, smoking, drinking, movies, psychoactive drugs etc… I like to write something that make people think too ^_^ Well I agree with others that you wrote a good poem ^_^

2006-11-19 16:35:58 · answer #1 · answered by Hermes 2 · 1 0

That poem is very nice. I liked it you should send it to Reader's Digest they just might pick it to be printed. Or find some place that will pay you for that poem. It makes people thing on a few things. Keep up the good work

2006-11-19 04:54:02 · answer #2 · answered by Andie F 2 · 1 0

Sure, I'll give you some feedback.

It's a wonderful Hallmark Card.

It's a tad bit preachy, the continual questions seem a little snobby or superior. Also, "Or are you so shameful", I think it's a typo.

It's a nice little piece, congrats!

2006-11-19 05:04:33 · answer #3 · answered by wrathofkublakhan 6 · 0 1

The poem is very good. Why don't you try some others also?

2006-11-19 05:00:24 · answer #4 · answered by superdad652003 1 · 1 0

I like it =) I think its really good and it had alot of thought put through it. did you write the poem?! if so good job,its a really meaningful poem :)

2006-11-19 04:51:23 · answer #5 · answered by The Annimal!! 2 · 1 0

that's a really good poem

2006-11-19 04:49:40 · answer #6 · answered by ? 2 · 1 0

I really like it. It makes you think.

2006-11-19 04:50:58 · answer #7 · answered by Kaylin 4 · 1 0

NO

2006-11-19 04:49:13 · answer #8 · answered by CITYguy 3 · 0 1

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