Why?
Why do I love you?
Why do I care?
Why do I cry for you wasting my tears?
I do really love you
I do really care
So why tell me why are you not even there?
2006-11-19 02:57:16 · 4 answers · asked by XxXTaRaXxX 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
very good. it is easy to read and has good meter. you should write a couple more stanza's. and other poems as well. you are very talented.
2006-11-19 03:00:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If I can drink water from all oceans on Earth, I love you.
If I can fly to heaven to see you, I love you.
If I can jump out of my window right now, I love you.
Can I drink water from all oceans on Earth? No
Do I have wings? No
Do I have the courage? No
So, I don't love you.
2006-11-19 11:03:13 · answer #2 · answered by frida_wang 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay, can do. Keep writing. With new experiences in life, you will write better and better poetry.
2006-11-19 11:00:25 · answer #3 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really nice..but its very short and i wasnt affected or touched by it..
2006-11-19 11:11:27 · answer #4 · answered by Sus-Girl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋