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For example....

QUALIFICATIONS:

I am the Treasurer for the Democrat Committee of WSU.
I’ve been a very active member of the Greenfield Women’s Queen Association.
I took two (2) years of high school TV & Radio and Spanish.
I oversaw my high school year book for two (2) years as Annual Staff Editor.
I traveled all over the state as the 2002 Wheels of Progress Queen.
I took public speaking courses in high school and in college.
I can type 94 words per minute
I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Works and Office, and Front Page.
I’ve been in a major motion picture; Seabiscuit, and a commercial for STAND.

Can you help me reword that, or is it okay?

2006-11-19 00:18:51 · 2 answers · asked by hithere234 1 in Business & Finance Careers & Employment

2 answers

When writing your resume you want to stay away from the use of the word "I" - it will come across as the resume is all about you when really it's all about the employer & their needs.

Try this....

- Treasurer for the Democrat Committee of WSU (spell out acronyms and place dates in too 2000 - 2005)

- Typing speed of 94 wpm (words per minute)

- Familiar with Microsoft Office products including Front Page.

Etc. Get the idea?

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2006-11-19 00:24:29 · answer #1 · answered by JLMelvin 5 · 0 0

JLMelvin gave you absolutely perfect advice...I really cannot think of anything else to add except to say that you have great accomplishments. Good luck with your job search.

2006-11-19 08:31:32 · answer #2 · answered by ValleyViolet 6 · 0 0

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