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could you help me write a clean story beginning with that line plz

2006-11-19 00:15:20 · 2 answers · asked by Kappy 3 in Education & Reference Homework Help

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Trapped in a dark and eerie cave I was unable to keep track of time. I soon realized that keeping track of time was the least of my worries and turned my thoughts to being trapped and how I was going to get out of this predicament. With no light to see I could only sense things around me and moving forward I felt with my hands until my touch fell on the rocky wall of the cave.
I could feel fresh air moving against my face and I knew that there was an exit. I moved slowly with my hand against the cave wall, stopping every now and then to feel the moving air against my skin and listening for sounds, any type of sounds that would guide me from this dark and dangerous place. The sound of falling water could be heard faintly somewhere in the distance.

2006-11-19 00:32:18 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

Sounds like "Tom Sawyer" lost in the mines ... get some inspiration from Mark Twain's character.

or write it as though you were a bat or glowworm / firefly ... but your identity is not known till you find your dad ...

or if you were a bear, time reference meant your parents were hibinating still, and you found them by the rumbling of your dad's snores

2006-11-19 00:30:36 · answer #2 · answered by wizebloke 7 · 1 0

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