I'm going to put this poem before class starts and while nobody is there. This is to prevent anyone from seeing who put it. As for people reading it nobody really cares about that stuff. Also it will be addressed to her but my name won't be written and shes always sitting in the same place since the beginning of the year. Also tell me how i should decorate the poem. I have an idea but i want other opinions.She's 19, im 17
When I think of the perfect girl,
Only you come to mind
With the intellect of a genius,
Eyes that sparkle like gems,
Hair as soft as silk,
An angelic voice that only sings beautiful melodies to my ears,
Cheeks as adorable and round like yours,
And a smile that lights up even the darkest room
No wonder you are God's only work of art
You're an amazing girl, an amazing person
You're special and irreplaceable to me
And my heart will never stop beating
For it lives off these feelings I have for you
2006-11-18 13:42:57 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
You write good poems.... put them on her desk already.... what are you waiting for?
2006-11-18 13:44:44 · answer #1 · answered by Jennifer L 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's cute. but i think that would be more appropriate if you were ACTUALLY in love with each other. that's seems a bit much for a crush. she'll be all panicky, and probably be like "WTF?" and talk about it all the time. and if she finds out it's you, it may be unattractive because it's almost clingy even though it's just attraction.
i'm not trying to put you down. just my opinion. it's a great poem. i just think you should loosen up a bit. please listen to me. you seem like a nice person. it's too soon....
sorry if you totally disagree. just my way of thinking...
2006-11-18 21:47:11 · answer #2 · answered by echo 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is so cute how can she say no?
maybe you should put your phone number on the bottom...
or do you plan on telling her who it is from after?
and how to decorate it?.. if you can draw well maybe you could try drawing a picture of her
2006-11-18 21:48:10 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Go ahead and put the poem there! I bet her reaction is fantastic!
2006-11-18 21:47:08 · answer #4 · answered by Jessica S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you should just talk to her instead of the whole secret admirer thing. i mean you are 17. just talk to her and see what she says.
2006-11-18 21:45:33 · answer #5 · answered by devltam 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OK how about roes are red violets are blue so what i waned to **** you to
2006-11-18 21:47:04 · answer #6 · answered by connie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that any girl would love it and it is very romantic. You definatly do it!
2006-11-18 21:45:53 · answer #7 · answered by Brianna 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Es hermoso.. it's beautiful my love .... do it fast .. and the best of luck to you !
2006-11-18 21:46:26 · answer #8 · answered by NA 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice i like it
2006-11-18 21:49:39 · answer #9 · answered by Muy Amado (I wish) 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOOOL are you waiting for other guys to insult you man!? you are doing one helluva job. i already told you...if you like your self esteem....DON'T DO IT!
2006-11-18 21:45:56 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋