People speak the most unspeakable
people say how am i be retrievable
people say he must be unloved - undone, unson
hey!!!! but they got it wrong!!
what i Got is undeniable
the truth i know is unforgettable
it's unbelievable
I'm not new to the game
I'm child of the king
I know I'm not ashamed
I'm a child of the king
People say that I misunderstood
people think I'm misinformed
they read the facts
and they miscalculate, they don't relate
such a big mistake
hey!! but they got it wrong
what i Got is undeniable
the truth i know is unforgettable
it's unbelievable
I'm not new to the game
I'm child of the king
I know I'm not ashamed
I'm a child of the king
IKNOW SOME PEOPLE ARE GOING TO ANSWER WITH ANOTHER SONG BACK LET'S SEE WHAT HAPPENS
BUT THIS SONG IS FOR YOU TO MEDITATE
2006-11-17 08:00:49 · 19 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
believe me it's nice song - =) i'm not telling you guys who wrote it
2006-11-17 08:09:54 · update #1
I'm not athiest, but it looks good to me. Did you write music to it also? I'm in the process of writing a few songs at the moment myself. One is a general Christian song, another a Christmas song, and a song for my wife.
http://musicman1701.multiply.com/music
Love, Hope, Peace, & Christ Be With You,
Cal-el & Swissy
2006-11-17 10:05:14 · answer #1 · answered by Prodigal Son 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I'm intrigued by one line in the refrain,"I'm child of the king". I'm guessing the "king" is God and you are claiming some kind of divine adoption? That would make you *special* and unlike ordinary people?
It is that kind of triumphalism that annoys atheists. Christians readily admit they cannot earn God's favor, then they turn around and deny such favor to anyone who doesn't believe exactly as they do. (I suspect God wasn't consulted about the deal.)
Either EVERYONE is a child of God, believer or not, or NO ONE is. Claiming a special status allows Christians to dehumanize non-Christians and ignore their basic human dignity. It starts pogroms, crusades and witch-hunts. You may just shrug and reply, "God's rules," but I know that no god worthy of respect would be so capricious and petty.
2006-11-17 16:17:45 · answer #2 · answered by skepsis 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I don't get why you're asking atheists about it.
I hope this isn't yours, because I don't like to be unintentionally cruel. But I don't think much of the lyrics. I'd have to hear the song itself to judge whether it's any good. But the lyrics are lacking.
Although that's ok - if you look at Marilyn Manson's lyrics, his aren't that great either. But many of those same songs are visceral.
2006-11-17 16:14:52 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am NOT an atheist, I am proudly a Christian and I think your song is awesome. I hope you get it published and I get to hear it on the radio and by the way how come we can hear music about anything on the radio but we need a special station to hear christian music? Why can't we hear christian music on regular stations? Are they afraid that people will start liking it better than the sick, sad lyrics that pass as music now? Just wondering?
2006-11-17 16:17:50 · answer #4 · answered by Theresa Rose 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Well, without music it is a poem. Not a real catchy poem. There are much better ones out there.
Substituting evidence of god with a poem/song is not the way to convince a person that god exists.
2006-11-17 16:04:44 · answer #5 · answered by A.Mercer 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The word choice is rather purile and forced, as if the author had picked a really bad rhythm, beat, and rhyme scheme, then had to 'settle' for words instead of using words fluently.
2006-11-17 16:04:34 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
It's not exactly good. Since you addressed it to atheists, it must be about your religion. It's just a song. It means nothing at all.
2006-11-17 16:09:59 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Don't care for it, but maybe if I could hear it with music, it might be different. What style is it? Pop? Soft rock? Fast, slow, medium tempo?
2006-11-18 16:03:32 · answer #8 · answered by SB 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Can't see it making the charts. What's it meant to be about? the last two lines (in capitals) don't scan with the rest.
2006-11-17 16:05:54 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What you got is "unbelievable". That part of the song is the truth.
Why do you think Atheists don't believe it?
2006-11-17 16:05:45 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋