How does this poem I compiled for a special person sound ?Please be honest...?

Question

Like a child in love, I felt a tingling in my chest,
I felt like it feels when you feel your very best;

Nothing else matters much, I have what I miss most,
I stayed awake all night asking, is this real or its a ghost;

I let go of myself, feeling what its like to be on cloud nine,
All these tests I have been through, some hard some just fine;

Is this love, I asked my soul, or merely another hurt,
That just feels good at first, then suddenly feels like dirt;

I have been hurt before, so I build around a huge wall,
My love cried out for me, but I couldn't just hear his call;

I am not the one you knew, for I know you not too well,
My hopes flew high up once, then suddenly, gave up and fell;

I am not the one you had, I gasped and struggled to tell,
My spirits not free anymore, I crept back into my lonely shell;

One day perhaps to eagles, I will ask to take her my sweet talk,
Tell her this was from my heart and never did I ever mock;

Her heart I may never win, for the heavens may not even know,
That the one who spoke from the heart, was the one to leave and go.

Answer 1

Admirable,i would be flying too high if someone special composed this poem for me.this poem has soul and can make the reader feel on top of world.this poem truely touched my heart coz i do have simliar feelings in my heart though i couldnt put it in a form of poem.Anyways,you have done a great job,i guess your special person truely deserve this poem.this person i bet is as beautiful as the poem.Hope it stays forever in that person's heart.Good luck!

Answer 2

Poet Laureate 2006.Wunderba.

Answer 3

That is a beuatiful poem, I would love it if someone to give it to me, It is
amazing

Answer 4

its okay. i would feel really important if someone made that for me though.