Family Stranger
He has to leave.
Its hard to explain;
hard to fix.
how do I say
its time to go?
we sit laughing,
What needs to be said
was said
I know the time has come
its all so good
Smiles.
But mama looks
I know,
he has to go.
bad actors on a tiny stage,
I leave the room,
what can I say, what can I do,
Papa, I call,
has to come
away from family
no longer his
I love u papa,
so you must leave now.
this isn’t your home
try to see
its hard to say
just leave.
go back to your house.
I know your alone.
not my fault.
papa must go.
2006-11-16 07:31:00 · 10 answers · asked by savanna m 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
very good. your talented:)
2006-11-16 07:34:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, do pay attention to the grammatical mistakes. I think the poem is good because I feel your pain.
2006-11-16 15:37:39 · answer #2 · answered by darkdiva 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh so sad. I hope papa finds happiness.
2006-11-16 15:34:01 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's nice.
Good Luck!
2006-11-16 16:30:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's sad, but really, really good. And it's good you have this medium to deal with your feelings.
2006-11-16 19:38:05 · answer #5 · answered by smokey 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very deep i like it a lott
2006-11-16 15:34:28 · answer #6 · answered by × 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it rocks,,,,,,,,, you are good at poems keep up the good work
2006-11-16 22:05:20 · answer #7 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow !
I think it is Great!
2006-11-16 15:33:14 · answer #8 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
'I know your alone.' should be 'I know you're alone.'
2006-11-16 15:32:30 · answer #9 · answered by S K 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dont make sence!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-11-16 15:34:12 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋