what do you think? part 2?

Question

Alone

I feel like I am the main character in a timeless dream.
A place where no one is still on my defending team.
I feel nothing but the hollow emptiness deep inside.
I try so hard, but the tears I shed I can’t seem to hide.

I search and I strive for some sort of piece of mind.
I’m afraid to admit that I am not ready for this ride.
My mind is making up fake scenarios and scenes.
Do I honestly want to know what it all really means.

The voice in my head tells me that no one even cares.
It says that my world means nothing compared to theirs.
As I look out at them I come to realize that it’s true.
In this time of confusion I don’t know who to run to.

Over and over again I ask myself why I feel so low.
The more I ask myself, the more I want to know.
Have I just happen to trip into a mental black hole?
How else can I explain the way I have lost control?

Though I am screaming and shouting for someone to help me
No one can hear me, no one knows, no one can see.
HE, he told me that I could tell him anything in my mind.
I guess that statement should have been well defined.

I told him everything that I could possibly explain.
About how my mental health I just can’t maintain.
The response “ I don’t know what to tell you”
From you that wasn’t something I was used to

This is why I didn’t tell you the last time about it.
I knew you wouldn’t understand not the least bit.
I wanted you to say “I love you, it’ll be okay.”
But instead I managed to scare you away.
You told me to tell you everything I go through.

You couldn’t handle it, or you didn’t want to.
Long ago I said you’re the lighter to my cigarette
Now the cigarette is out, how could you forget?

Pain just overflows in my emotional chest of drawers
‘Cause like the saying goes, when it rains it pours.
my loneliness is still here, but why wouldn’t it be.
No one can hear me, no one knows, no one can see.

it just doesn’t seem right, and it doesn’t seem fair
this isn’t just a timeless dream, it’s a nightmare.
No one to listen, no one to hold, no one is here.
No one to notice or miss me when I disappear

That voice is still talking, it’s getting harder to ignore.
“You know that you don’t want to hurt anymore.”
“They don’t know you like I do, and neither do you.”
“No more being alone, you know what it’s time to do.”

Answer 1

I love it you would make a good poet or writer. God bless you! :)

Answer 2

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Answer 3

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Answer 4

that is a great poem...

Answer 5

okay.....