what do you think?

Question

Continuous Disappointment

I’m spinning around and around, out of control.

My mind is not all there and nobody knows

I try to stop and get off of this ride.

As soon as I get off I’m hit by the ocean’s tide.



I pull and I pull trying to get to the top.

This flow of flowing water, when will it stop.

I swim and I swim til I get to the beach.

But when I’m there my world is out of reach.



I walk and I walk trying to find the town.

When I arrive no one can be found.

I’m searching for familiar voice or face.

There doesn’t seem to be any in this place.



I just want a voice that can express in any way.

That things will be alright and everything’s okay.

I’m looking for someone whose heart is pure.

That can hold me and make me feel secure.



I search and don’t find but still I resume.

I see something move in a small dark room.

My heart starts to race with hopes of affection

To my surprise it’s a mirror and just my reflection.

thank you for your opinion. i put alot of emotion in it. ever since i was 12 i have been using my poetry as an outlet of my frustrations and sorrows that the world throws at me. more to come for opinions

Answer 1

i think you need to go talk to a dr. i have this problem when i go some place and when i get there i'm some place else so i went to see the shrink and he told me i was just lost and showed me where i really was. i think he can do the same for you and then you will be loved by many people i can tell.

Answer 2

Well written thoughts.

Puberty maybe?

Love yourself even through the rough spots!

Answer 3

well written.
AND about the sentiment? You have to depend on yourself, learn to love and hold yourself.