Can’t find the words, hard to speak,
My heart is yours forever to keep.
You’re in my thoughts, every minute it seems,
And when I sleep…You’re in my dreams.
Hands are shaking, hard to breathe,
You’re mine forever, and I’ll never leave.
What’s crazy about this thing called love
Is that I fell for a girl who was sent from above.
You’re loveable, amazing, and flawless too.
Everything I look for I find in you!
2006-11-15 01:41:42 · 9 answers · asked by trp 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
oops I forgot your name.
Whatever you are
If you are serious in asking this question I will tell you my feeling. Don't look at anything and hear any one. Just give this letter to her and if she agrees she will be the one who understands a true and innocent heart. But if she doesn't agree don't cry boy as your love is true but the person you loved is false and she is going to love many false things in her life like money, fashion and all. Ok? Now be confident and propose her. My all best wishes are with you. And the poem. It's so sweet. And let me know the result. I will be waitingggggg.
2006-11-15 02:04:16 · answer #1 · answered by nag K 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sometimes words cannot discribe,
The feeling i tried to hide,
Am i the one for you
Or am i just a fool
Searching for signs
In your avoiding eyes
Tell me the truth
Let me not be the fool
Signs of avoiding my eyes
Hanging my heart up high high
My heart broken.
My love taken.
When could i soar above the sky
Like the days before i looked into your eyes
hurt me not.
if you love me not.
(sorry, im very sad , thats why i left this here, good luck to you .)
2006-11-15 01:57:34 · answer #2 · answered by jade s 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Oh l think it is so sweet. I'm sure she will love it. I know l would have, you are very talented. Just hope you meant it all. Well done. Keep up the good work.
2006-11-15 01:48:03 · answer #3 · answered by kazzadanni 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is absolutely sweet/cute/loveable/special! She is a very lucky girl!! You are a poet and you dont even know it!!
2006-11-15 01:51:29 · answer #4 · answered by bee 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Guys write chicks poems usually before they get into their pants. Let go of the pen and grab the chick.
2006-11-15 01:47:06 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like it, it is a masterpiece from the heart. Keep it up and you might have a job as a writer.
2006-11-15 01:46:00 · answer #6 · answered by supernerd 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I write poems too
and that was
AMAZINGLY ADORABLE!!!
she will love it
2006-11-15 01:48:53 · answer #7 · answered by grace 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very sweet
2006-11-15 01:45:50 · answer #8 · answered by jenkins_nichole 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
BEAUTIFUL DUDE
2006-11-15 01:44:13 · answer #9 · answered by XgothXminsterXchildX 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋