WHEN u were CALLED U FOR ME GETTIN THE PRIZE
U DIDNT!!
WHEN U WERE CALLED TO SEE ME IN A PLAY
U DIDNT!!
when u were called to cheer me on sports day
u didnt!!
when u were called coz i was sad n i needed
u didnt!!
WHEn u were called to see me in the hospital
u didnt!!
when u were called at my graduation
u didnt!!
when my country called me in a war i u told me to return home safely
I DIDNT!!
2006-11-15 01:37:22 · 5 answers · asked by Angad 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
hey there are some errors...i think u were in hurry so never mind..well for first try its great thats what i think...i will deffinately look forward for ur next poem..
2006-11-15 01:47:25 · answer #1 · answered by ? 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Woo hoo, yet another poem by utilising my 2d fave paki !! This one carry mwah down yet because of the fact im between the "angels" woohoo you get a famous individual from me! surprising poem :D p.s if I ever get instructed to make a poem from college you greater proper be waiting *grins*
2016-10-15 14:04:40 · answer #2 · answered by spurr 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
So bleak! Did u have a failed friendship or something? Very emotional...
2006-11-15 01:40:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!! after all it is your first poem it's ok~``
2006-11-15 01:43:20 · answer #4 · answered by anne 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you should read more poetry.
2006-11-15 01:42:00 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋