I'm going 2 put this poem b4 class starts and while nobody is there. This is to prevent anyone from seeing who put it. As 4 people reading it nobody really cares about that stuff. Also it will be addressed 2 her but my name wont be written and shes always sitten in the same place since the beginning of the year.Also tell me how i should decorate the poem. I have an idea but i want other opinions.
When I think of the perfect girl
You are the only one that comes to mind
With the intelligence of a genius
Eyes of an angel
Hair of a saint
And a laugh that lights up a room
No wonder you are God’s only work of art
You’re an amazing girl, an amazing person
You’re special and irreplaceable in my heart
2006-11-15 01:32:00 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
didn't you ask this yesterday
2006-11-15 01:33:45 · answer #1 · answered by WannaKnow 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Look this poem is ok. Sounds like you copied it from a book of romance. Seems like I have seen poems like this so many times. Get more creative, all the romantic poems are like yours. Use ideas that have never been used before. I think she will like it, but really I can tell you have not devoted a lot of time in this poem. It is too original.
2006-11-15 01:39:11 · answer #2 · answered by Rooster 1972 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi there, I did this when I was young myself (I'm 27 now). My experience is that it is very sweet and romantic, but one of two things will happen:
1) She won't know it is you who gave it to her, so it will be a "secret admirer" kind of thing
2) She will find out who gave it to her, and she will wonder why you didn't have the guts to give it to her yourself.
What women want my young friend is a man with confidence, even if you are still too young to see yourself as that man. Notice how the girls like the football players? The jocks? These guys have one thing apparant... confidence.
My suggestion to you is to find the courage to give it to her yourself, and show her you have some balls. That's going to REALLY impress her.
Good luck
2006-11-15 01:38:11 · answer #3 · answered by Jericho 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is a very sweet poem! Shoe i would definitly melt! But you should not be scared though, you should give the poem to her yourself! It is much more personal and sweet. Dont decorate it too much, too much is not nice. Just a red heart maybe, or two. Good luck to you!!
2006-11-15 01:44:44 · answer #4 · answered by bee 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You gotta use rhymes. to illustrate: What do I do to ignore approximately them in the back of me? Do I save on with my instincts blindly? Do I cover my satisfaction from those undesirable aims and supply in to unhappy recommendations that are maddening? Do I sit down right here and attempt to stand it? Or do i attempt to seize them pink-exceeded? Do I have confidence some and get fooled via phoniness, Or do I have confidence no person and stay in loneliness? with the aid of fact i can't carry on while i'm stretched so skinny I make the impressive strikes yet i'm lost interior of I placed on my on a regular basis façade yet then I purely finally end up getting harm returned If I turn my returned i'm defenseless And to bypass blindly seems mindless If I cover my satisfaction and permit all of it bypass on Then they are going to take from me 'till each and every thing is long previous If I enable them to bypass i would be outdone yet while i attempt to seize them i would be outrun If i'm killed via the questions like a maximum cancers Then i would be buried interior the silence of the respond it is easily rap i made up yet i used it in my poem i had to make up at school. attempt it. thank you, Chris. right this is somethin else i made up purely needed to share. I awoke in a dream as we talk To the chilly of the static, and placed my chilly feet on the floor Forgot all approximately the day gone by Remembering i'm pretending to be the place i'm no longer anymore somewhat style of hypocrisy and that i'm left interior the wake of the blunders, slow to react even nonetheless you're so on the element of me you're nevertheless so distant, and that i can't deliver you returned I hit you and you hit me returned We fall to the floor, something of the day stands nevertheless advantageous line between this and that as quickly as issues bypass incorrect I faux the previous isn't genuine Now i'm trapped in this memory and that i'm left interior the wake of the blunders, slow to react even nonetheless you're on the element of me you're nevertheless so distant, and that i can't deliver you returned
2016-10-03 23:53:43 · answer #5 · answered by greenwell 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a very genuine sounding, nice poem. (And for silly people that say it doesn't rhyme, poetry doesn't always have to rhyme!)
Good luck! I hope she likes it!
2006-11-15 01:36:09 · answer #6 · answered by Jen 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool poem ware did you find it?what book?you couldn't have wrote it you cant spell that good look at your question you asked and then look at the poem.you should learn to spell just like me?.
good luck with the girl
2006-11-15 01:38:55 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It is a really nice poem, but I am sure she will like it even more if you give it to her yourself!
2006-11-15 01:33:40 · answer #8 · answered by ? 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Its beautiful! She will love it and probably try her hardest to try to figure out who wrote it. I think its cute and that its a good idea. GO FOR IT!
2006-11-15 01:43:56 · answer #9 · answered by acollegeangel 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
do it man.....i wrote my girl a poem and she cried she loved it so much....then she put it in a poetry contest and it got second place which is besides the point.....but you only live once sogo for it
2006-11-15 01:35:05 · answer #10 · answered by trp 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think that is beautiful! i wish i would get sumthin lik that but u should decorate it wit hearts or roses or sumthin lik that if noe how to draw
2006-11-15 01:35:15 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋