can you help me correct my grammer?

Question

A way of keeping good health is rising, lemongrass hot pot is good choice, lemongrass is a kind of herb, there is a treat sent to improve immune system , and against influenza etc……
When the pot boiled can emit delicate fragrance, its soup, taste agreeable sweetness, when you put sliced meat or seafood, in the pot for a few minutes, you can taste fragrance. Keep between the teeth. Oh so delicious.
Next, let’s talk about it’s(its=it is) sauce, the sauce is lemongrass winging to chipping and soy mix together, any food soak it didn’t taste too salted lemongrass hot pot could reduce, physical loading of metabolism, both keep the sad health and enjoy the delicacy if you have a chance , you can try it.

Answer 1

I'm not sure if you want the entire paragraph corrected, but the "it's" issue is incorrect. It should be "its", which is the possessive form of "it", while "it's" is a contraction meaning "it is"
(its = something belonging to it, it's = it is)

Answer 2

The way of keeping good health is rising. Lemongrass hot pot is a good choice. Its a kind of herb that improves the immune system and against guards against influenza etc. When the pot is boiled it emits delicate fragrance. Its soup taste is agreeable and sweet. When you put sliced meat or seafood in the pot for a few minutes, you can enjoy the fragrance. when kept between the teeth it tastes delicious. Next, let’s talk about it’s sauce,. The sauce is made of lemongrass chipped and soy mixed together. Any food soaked in it doesn't taste too salted. Lemongrass hot pot could reduce physical loading of metabolism. So keep good health and enjoy the delicacy if you have a chance. Please try it.


I just changed some wordings if you don't mind.

Answer 3

Mind if I try? I have many questions.

"A way of keeping good health is rising." (Rising?? Rising what?? Rising interest?? )

Let's try:

Interest in using herbs to maintain good health is rising.

One herb with many healthful uses is lemongrass. (now that we've stated lemongrass has MANY healthfull uses, we have to state what they are)

(This might be a good time to explain lemongrass pot. Is it made into a tea? Or is it added to water and used for other purposes?)

It(For example here you could explain "It" as "Lemongrass tea") is used to improve the immune system thus guarding against influenza...(add others.)

(What do you mean "physical loading of metabolism." Do you mean excess salt? Does soaking salty foods in lemongrass reduce the salt content?)

(Once you have discussed the medical attributes in using lemongrass, then move on to the delightful taste:)

In addition to its healthful benefits, lemongrass added to soup emits a delicate frgrance and adds an agreeable sweetness to sliced meat or seafood in the soup.

(I'm sorry, I don't understand the "winging to chipping and soy mix together" to know what your are making....)

(For a final line:)

When lemongrass is added to the diet it can improve health and introduce an exciting new taste to foods.