Why Me
Here in my bed room sleeping
when I awoke to a childs cries
why me what did i do to be hurt & Aboused
why me im curching here & there
I cant find her but i still hear her cries
why me dosen't mommy care about me
she aloud daddy to hurt me
why me still looking for that child with in
i found her in my heart in me
crying so I picked the child up
in to my arms & said im here.
Ill protect you now
that night the angels came
& took the child to heaven
I said to her you have nothing to fear now
Gods with you
but yet late late at night
I still hear her
CRY WHY ME
Violet Mae Evans
2006-11-14 15:45:22 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
im sorry about the typos but i have trouble with spelling
2006-11-14 15:57:38 · update #1
well to tell you the truth i when throug hell for 15 years of sexual abuse & i still suffer from the effects of it but i deal with a little better then i did 5 years ago
2006-11-14 16:06:48 · update #2
I see this poem as a heart felt poem with a lot of deep sorrow, If this is your life experience I am very sorry that this has happened to you.
Loosing a child can be very painful, which I'm sure it would be for you if this is what happened, for you but I would also like to say to you that the true and Almighty God is aware of and feeling your pain in compassion and that is also the reason for his promise, many people who have gone or are going through a similar experience, and asking why?This promise I just spoke of is found in Revelation Ch21:verse4)and it is a very heartwarming one where God promises to wipe away every tear from mankind's eyes, and that he will actually swallow up death, mourning and sorrow,and pain will be no more.The dead will be resurrected to life again becoming conscious again, is this not a wonder full promise from a very loving God, who cares very deeply for us, and our pains even past experiences will have gone from our minds, and the ones that caused those pains will be punished, so any who have perpetrated pain to others, will be dealt with justly
2006-11-14 16:12:55 · answer #1 · answered by I speak Truth 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I think that you wrote this from your heart. If I knew this child I would want to pick her up and hold her away from the pain too. As for grammer maybe you should check your spelling and maybe a few typos. There is a special place in GOD'S heart for children of abuse and HE will vindicate them in due time. Shalom
2006-11-15 00:01:13 · answer #2 · answered by softspot 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's pretty good...but it could some some work. You can tell it's written from the heart, though. Also, I just have to comment on how you signed your whole name at the end of your poem. You should never show your whole name online; it's very risky.
2006-11-14 23:53:33 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I find it very painful. Some parts I did not understand, but I think that is just because of a few spelling errors. You should seek some abuse counselling.
2006-11-14 23:54:19 · answer #4 · answered by GORDO BLAKHART 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very promising! You have a few spelling and punctuation issues, but the poem itself is pretty and sad. Great job! :-)
2006-11-14 23:47:47 · answer #5 · answered by yumyum 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
sounds very dark and i hope this is not something that really happened to you. If this did happen you need to get help and a pistol.
2006-11-15 00:01:31 · answer #6 · answered by spanky 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, Has a pretty good meaning :)
2006-11-14 23:48:25 · answer #7 · answered by Matt 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its pretty good.
2006-11-14 23:52:45 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, I dont like poem...
2006-11-14 23:51:52 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
nice poem, i liked it.
2006-11-14 23:56:16 · answer #10 · answered by awesome 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋