I'm going 2 put this poem b4 class starts and while nobody is there. This is to prevent anyone from seeing who put it. As 4 people reading it nobody really cares about that stuff. Also it will be addressed 2 her but my name wont be written and shes always sitten in the same place since the beginning of the year.Also tell me how i should decorate the poem. I have an idea but i want other opinions.
When I think of the perfect girl
You are the only one that comes to mind
With the intelligence of a genius
Eyes of an angel
Hair of a saint
And a laugh that lights up a room
No wonder you are God’s only work of art
You’re an amazing girl, an amazing person
You’re special and irreplaceable in my heart
2006-11-14 13:55:05 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
maybe you should put your name, so then she doesnt think that somebody else did it.
dont be shy. but dont cut the poem its cute.
good luck!=]
2006-11-14 13:58:45 · answer #1 · answered by megan h 2 · 2⤊ 2⤋
You gotta use rhymes. For example:
What do I do to ignore them behind me?
Do I follow my instincts blindly?
Do I hide my pride from these bad dreams
And give in to sad thoughts that are maddening?
Do I sit here and try to stand it?
Or do I try to catch them red-handed?
Do I trust some and get fooled by phoniness,
Or do I trust nobody and live in loneliness?
Because I can't hold on when I'm stretched so thin
I make the right moves but I'm lost within
I put on my daily façade but then
I just end up getting hurt again
If I turn my back I'm defenseless
And to go blindly seems senseless
If I hide my pride and let it all go on
Then they'll take from me 'till everything is gone
If I let them go I'll be outdone
But if I try to catch them I'll be outrun
If I'm killed by the questions like a cancer
Then I'll be buried in the silence of the answer
This is actually rap i made up but i used it in my poem i had to make up in school. Try it.
Thanks, Chris.
Here's somethin else i made up just wanted to share.
I woke up in a dream today
To the cold of the static, and put my cold feet on the floor
Forgot all about yesterday
Remembering I'm pretending to be where I'm not anymore
A little taste of hypocrisy
And I'm left in the wake of the mistake, slow to react
Even though you're so close to me
You're still so distant, and I can't bring you back
I hit you and you hit me back
We fall to the floor, the rest of the day stands still
Fine line between this and that
When things go wrong I pretend the past isn't real
Now I'm trapped in this memory
And I'm left in the wake of the mistake, slow to react
Even though you're close to me
You're still so distant, and I can't bring you back
2006-11-14 13:59:01 · answer #2 · answered by max p 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Don't do it! This is way to heavy for a girl you merely like. It is the kind of poem you write for a lover - not a crush. You will end up looking foolish and feeling stupid. Wait until the two of you have something real going on - then give her the poem - once you have her for a gf.
And Max P. - I like your rap - great stuff!!
2006-11-14 13:59:32 · answer #3 · answered by chris 5 · 4⤊ 1⤋
very nice poem did you write it for decor maybe just some flowers and the sun skip the hearts for now. hope it goes well for you if you don't sign it she won't know it's from you and may think some other guy did and approach him and then what if they hook up because of your poem. Be brave rejection is a part of life it doesn't happen all the time but i am sure we have all felt it at one time or another
2006-11-14 13:59:11 · answer #4 · answered by katlady927 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Why not give her the poem yourself, so she knows it's from YOU, rather than some other guy?
If you want to use the poem to get her to like you, it isn't going to help you if she doesn't know who wrote it!
2006-11-14 14:02:07 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
To be honest it's kinda corny, girls don't like that we like a guy who just is honest and can come up to you and just say this is how i feel.We just want originality not some poem.
2006-11-14 13:58:55 · answer #6 · answered by melyssa star 3 · 3⤊ 1⤋
I don't get, Hair of a saint! Change that line and it might work for ya!
2006-11-14 13:59:59 · answer #7 · answered by Adam 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
that is so freaking sweet! you should def. give the poem to her! make sure shes knows its from you though!
2006-11-14 14:07:55 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think it's embarrassing, unmanly, a cop out and that you should exercise some direct courage in speaking to her.
2006-11-14 13:56:53 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
thats sweet but you know her right? beucase if you didn;t it would be kind of like a big shock like intimidating
2006-11-14 14:03:27 · answer #10 · answered by katee211 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋