I'm going 2 put this poem b4 class starts and while nobody is there. Also tell me how i should decorate the poem. I have an idea but i want other opinions.
When I think of the perfect girl
You are the only one that comes to mind
With the intelligence of a genius
Eyes of an angel
Hair of a saint
And a laugh that lights up a room
No wonder you are God’s only work of art
You’re an amazing girl, an amazing person
You’re special and irreplaceable in my heart
2006-11-14 12:35:39 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
OMG!! this is amazing. i would cry if i was her
2006-11-14 12:38:09 · answer #1 · answered by Karbare 2 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Before class starts...That might not be such a great idea...As if someone else was to go into the room before her, they would see it, and probably pick it up and read it...Then seeing who it was from and who it was to etc, would most likely make a scene. Do this only if this is the only way you can get it to her. However, did you possibly think about putting it in her locker (I do not know if you are at high school or what)? Or possibly even just giving it to her. Another idea is to (if you have her address-legally have her address ie she gave it to you) post it. Except with a difference. Put the poem in an envelope. On this envelope write "Do not open until (put a date here-a week, two from now)". Put this envelope into another one, and write the address on the outside one. When she receives it, it will keep her guessing as to what the envelope contains...and often enhances her reading of the poem...(Speaking from experience *angel halo appears*).
As for the poem itself-very very nice :)
Well done.
Good luck :D
2006-11-14 12:44:45 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Aww that is sooo sweet! If I got a note like that: from such a poetic soul then yes I would cry. But tears of JOY! I would suggest hearts for the decorations!
2006-11-14 12:39:13 · answer #3 · answered by Ashley 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that is beautiful, I wouldn't change anything and yes this would make my heart soft very fast...If you want to you could put a single rose next to the poem that should get her to feel really good. Once again that is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it with us...
2006-11-14 12:39:41 · answer #4 · answered by beagirl40 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You gotta use rhymes. to illustrate: What do I do to ignore approximately them in the back of me? Do I save on with my instincts blindly? Do I cover my satisfaction from those undesirable aims and supply in to unhappy recommendations that are maddening? Do I sit down right here and attempt to stand it? Or do i attempt to seize them pink-exceeded? Do I have confidence some and get fooled via phoniness, Or do I have confidence no person and stay in loneliness? with the aid of fact i can't carry on while i'm stretched so skinny I make the impressive strikes yet i'm lost interior of I placed on my on a regular basis façade yet then I purely finally end up getting harm returned If I turn my returned i'm defenseless And to bypass blindly seems mindless If I cover my satisfaction and permit all of it bypass on Then they are going to take from me 'till each and every thing is long previous If I enable them to bypass i would be outdone yet while i attempt to seize them i would be outrun If i'm killed via the questions like a maximum cancers Then i would be buried interior the silence of the respond it is easily rap i made up yet i used it in my poem i had to make up at school. attempt it. thank you, Chris. right this is somethin else i made up purely needed to share. I awoke in a dream as we talk To the chilly of the static, and placed my chilly feet on the floor Forgot all approximately the day gone by Remembering i'm pretending to be the place i'm no longer anymore somewhat style of hypocrisy and that i'm left interior the wake of the blunders, slow to react even nonetheless you're so on the element of me you're nevertheless so distant, and that i can't deliver you returned I hit you and you hit me returned We fall to the floor, something of the day stands nevertheless advantageous line between this and that as quickly as issues bypass incorrect I faux the previous isn't genuine Now i'm trapped in this memory and that i'm left interior the wake of the blunders, slow to react even nonetheless you're on the element of me you're nevertheless so distant, and that i can't deliver you returned
2016-10-03 23:29:38 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Boy you know how to write a peom put hearts on the poaper. That should get her attention plus flowers too. with a chocolate bar on the side
2006-11-14 12:39:31 · answer #6 · answered by Sweet Thang 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It is a beautiful poem. BUT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES DO NOT GIVE IT TO HER YET! Listen, it makes a girl feel creepy if your saying she is an angel and God's only work of art. When you are her bf then give her the poem.
2006-11-14 12:39:36 · answer #7 · answered by QueenofLeon 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
If I was that girl I'd probably get a restraining order against you. You don't have...like... photographs of her taken with a telephoto lens plastered all over the walls of your bedroom do you?
2006-11-14 12:43:17 · answer #8 · answered by Barry DaLive 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
ok first of GIRL not GURL
but i think its sweet..but it would be better if you just walked up to her and gave it to her and then walked away..dont' leave it on her desk what if she decided to sit somewhere else that day...and it ends up in someone elses hands you don't want that now do you..
2006-11-14 12:39:52 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Save the poem and just ask her out. You'll know if you are wasting your time or really got your angel afterwards.
2006-11-14 12:39:16 · answer #10 · answered by Eddie S 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Sure, she should be bawling by the time the class starts..
2006-11-14 12:38:17 · answer #11 · answered by Daughtry-luver 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋