this is a poem i wrote and i really like it but i want ur guys opinions
Im free to like, not love, but fear
I have no beginning to the end of this year
My hearts been healed, revealed and then sealed
My skin grew thicker but, never got peeled
-lexyy
Please don’t take this!
It took me a while it may not seem ilike it but it did!
thx in advance for your opinions
-lexyy
2006-11-14 11:44:59 · 19 answers · asked by punkrockprincess 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
thanks for the opinions and complements i really appreciate it :]]
2006-11-14 12:28:42 · update #1
i like it... its different a bit confusing at the first bit but then when you read the hole thing its great... you should make up another verse and show some one big and famous just like send it around to different people and see what they have to say.. but i really like i mean i dont like poetry but i love this one... well done
2006-11-14 11:50:46 · answer #1 · answered by JoJOJo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think that it is a really good poem. i just may not have posted it on here. there are bad people out there that will just take your poem even though you asked nicely. it is good though, i like it. keep doing poetry!
2006-11-14 19:48:29 · answer #2 · answered by JennyJen91 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it! Its so revealing & heart felt, it really spoke to me, I can relate to it. Well done! I think its excellent! Keep writing, I want to see more!
2006-11-14 19:47:56 · answer #3 · answered by *Care Bear* 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love ti ti makes you feel all the bad things in life ou did and makes you want to change everything in your past and it actualy solved some problems in my life right now
p.s can u give me 10 points i'm realy behind
2006-11-14 19:51:22 · answer #4 · answered by JUST A PIECE OF HEAVEN 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its deep...
But not my style of poetry, but thats the good thing about poetry, every style is unique and personal to the author...
2006-11-14 19:54:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anastasia 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's pretty deep were you hurt when you wrote it? I think it's pretty good I've written over 60 poems
2006-11-14 19:46:59 · answer #6 · answered by graciegirl 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i dont like it. it gives me a headache. It opens the door to stupid. Go simple with meaning. Live and get deep
2006-11-14 19:49:33 · answer #7 · answered by M2J 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You sound heartbroken!are u? then that is a good way of expressing the emotion inside you.
2006-11-14 19:48:37 · answer #8 · answered by sherie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's good, i'd never be able to write like that!
2006-11-14 19:48:50 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey that's better than what i can do! Good Job!
2006-11-14 19:47:39 · answer #10 · answered by K___man 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋