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This is for a line in a poem, not a pick up line. Rate each one.

1. You are so beautiful, the sun rises just to see you shine.
2. Your eyes are so beautiful that God copied the blue and spread it accross the sky.
3. The stars were created so everyone could experience looking into your eyes.

2006-11-13 09:10:47 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

16 answers

number 1. Mushy and sentimental, but not overboard. the other two are a little 'too' much



by the way....consider it "yoinked!"

2006-11-13 09:15:30 · answer #1 · answered by binary 2 · 2 0

Number 2

2006-11-13 17:12:35 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0 1

On a scale of 1-10 (ten being the best):

1: 2
2: 2
3: 3

All of the lines are really cliche.

2006-11-13 17:13:38 · answer #3 · answered by sucha_jewel 2 · 0 2

number 1 sounds really beautiful

2006-11-13 17:20:16 · answer #4 · answered by ♪Þearl♪ 4 · 2 0

My favorite is Number 1, and it seems the most poetic to me.

2006-11-13 17:16:13 · answer #5 · answered by ~♥~ I ∫Ôvέ Årt ~♫☼♥ ~ 4 · 2 0

10, 9, 9

2006-11-13 17:13:14 · answer #6 · answered by itsallforyou 2 · 0 1

sorry, I don't like any of em.

Maybe a 5

How about "Your sweet and shiny eyes are like the stars above Laredo, like meat and potatoes to me." from an old song

2006-11-13 17:14:44 · answer #7 · answered by kurticus1024 7 · 0 1

#1 for sure. The other two speak of only one of his/her features ( eyes) but the first one speaks of indefinate beauty....The first one would definatly be my pick...it just sounds so captivated....

2006-11-13 17:19:50 · answer #8 · answered by chicwitpurpose 2 · 2 0

The third one seems more poetic. The first two remind me of cheesy pickup lines.

2006-11-13 17:13:01 · answer #9 · answered by Jen 2 · 0 2

All of them are good man. I hope you dont mind if I write those to the girl I like. K thnx.

2006-11-13 17:12:50 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

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