http://teenpoetry.student.com/poem.php?pid=249059
2006-11-11 19:35:24 · 8 answers · asked by Dr. Bob 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Etiquette
I read the poem,
Sorry I'm not artistic enough to interpret the poem,
but the way You express the poem sounds like it's your life story untold, or maybe what You understand of life, there in your country...
Mine is different...hmmm..anyway, there's always room for improvement right?
Keep on composing great masterpiece..I'll read it if U posted it here again :)
2006-11-11 19:46:29 · answer #1 · answered by fadriz04 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not the best poem I've ever read, but for a teen poem it's not bad either. You certainly express some emotions that are common to the human experience.
2006-11-13 18:50:37 · answer #2 · answered by drshorty 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, practically speaking the poem suggests loneliness because no one would be with someone like that.I could barely finish it because I found it unoriginal with a bad tempo. I must compliment you though for writing poems. You will only improve. Keep it up and life's experiences will sharpen your skills. Good luck and keep writing.
2006-11-15 04:15:34 · answer #3 · answered by firestarter 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I did not care much for it, sorry. Seemed sad, dismal, unsettling..not the way I envision it to be. "I think I shall never see a poem as lovely as a tree" written by Joyce Kilner as he died.
2006-11-12 06:32:25 · answer #4 · answered by tamara.knsley@sbcglobal.net 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I just don't trust poem's written by Dr. Bob's.
2006-11-15 07:32:08 · answer #5 · answered by manbearpig 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Meaningful. But the lines can be refined further though.
I'm not able to comprehend why its entitled Sex, Sex.
2006-11-12 03:48:32 · answer #6 · answered by Saffren 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought it was very good. Rather sad though
2006-11-12 03:42:56 · answer #7 · answered by jrsygrl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
seemed pretty emo to me.
2006-11-12 03:51:40 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋