can any1 help me with my story?

Question

im writin a story on anythin random but i also want to include a kissin scene but ive never been kissed b4. im only 14 n i need help writin th scene

Answer 1

That, provides the honesty and perspective for your story. Who better to describe the special first time sensation of experiencing a kiss than a young 14 year old girl?

Your story is based on the build up to the kiss, and all the thoughts and expectations, and the anticipation of bliss and rainbows, with showers of diamonds and layers of love and angels and cupids dancing and singing all around.

You will speak as an authority on innocence and in that, you will be an expert writer, as you will know what you are talking about.

Be a dream weaver in your writing on the build up to the point of the first kiss, then leave the rest to the imagination of your readers, as each and every one will feel and experience a different imagined event based on an outcome they themselves created in their own minds.

Write of sweet dreams. . .and flying machines . . .but not in pieces on the ground.

Think outside the bun,. . . write well, . . . and speak from the heart . . . . . . . .and you shall succeed.

Darryl S.

Answer 2

when u write the focus shouldnt be on the kiss, it will make things too obvious that the writer may be a bit either hormonal, inexperienced or sexually frustrated. explicit scenes are best left for someone who's experienced. a lot of good books i've read by famous authors doesnt necessarily talk about kissing and how the kiss takes place. you could say a lot about what happens before the kiss to lead up to it...for instance :

Alexis awoke and felt her hair being lightly toyed with, she blinked and realized they were still inside the cinema. She had fallen asleep, how embarrassing! She lifted her head to peer at the screen, then averted her eyes to his face, and their eyes met for a brief few seconds before she felt his lips on hers. It as her first kiss, and a heady excited feeling swept over her despite the fact that his lips had merely brushed hers.
"Wakey wakey" he whispered casually. She, on the other hand, was trying so hard to control her breathing, she couldnt believe it, just like that, for a brief magical moment, she was now a 16 year old who had been kissed. Goodbye labels! No more name-calling and mocking questions from other girls at pyjama parties. She wanted him to kiss her again, but his eyes seemed fixed on the screen, so she straightened up, and pretended to carry on watching.

Answer 3

ok well its always good to have a little romance. one of the best tricks is to make a dramatic scene i.e. girls parents die. then the next thing you should do is have the boy character sweet but though at the same time so that anyone reading would be like "Omg i would love to have a guy like that!". so during your dramatic scene have the boy bump into the girl(its always best if you make the girl character reluctant to tell the guy whats wrong, that way in your story the guy has to push to get her answer and then it shows how loving he is towards her) have a POV of the boy (POV= basicially whats going through the guys mind at the time.) have it at a certain part where he just cant bare to see her cry any longer and kisses her, i know corney, but around where i live this kinda stuffs all girls read! hope i helped.

Answer 4

well...your still young but i can already tell that you are talented...and there's nothing wrong adding a kiss scene even tho. most ppl would think thats unappropriate for girls your age...i have no problem watsoever...to help you with your story...you should imagine how your first kiss would be....how would you want it...and where will you be when it happens...just think about those and let your imagination take over...it will come to you...i promise...i wish you best wishes to you and your story and when your done...mayb i can read it...yes i'll b interested....=)

Answer 5

Why don't you write about not being kissed? That would be much more interesting because the world is flooded with stories with kissing scenes!

Answer 6

i think u shud say they went out 4 a romatic meal at the end of the nite he took her home a kisses her she felt like she was flotting amoung the clouds a kiss is passete shows love and affection xxxxx i hope iv helpes xx

Answer 7

just say a soft and gentle kiss or a hard passionate kiss that should be all the info a 14 year old who has'nt kissed before should know

Answer 8

Gemini- The sign of verbal substitute and Speech. Archetypes for Gemini: The Jester, the Storyteller, the author, the participant, the Social butterfly, the Jack of all trades, the Interpreter ^ | | stumbled on that for the time of many web pages. Lol.

Answer 9

well it is hard to explain that kind of stuff. instead of describing the actual kiss, describe more of how it happened. something like "and then he tilted my head back and placed his lips on mine..." end of scene. u dont have to go into great detail, sometimes the mystery is more interesting!

Answer 10

Copy a chapter from a Barbara Carland novel, that'll do ya