Not exactly a book, but?

Question

The wind woke me up five minutes ago. I asked my mom and dad what was happening, but they sent me back to bed. I don’t blame them, because it was the middle of the night. I’m 13 now, but I still feel as though they treat me like a child, We live in the lower part of the tree, so we don’t get as much sunlight as the leaves on the upper branches. My parents say it’s better to live here than on the upper part of the tree because we learn to take better care of ourselves, and become a better family. The leaves on the upper branches are spoiled and don’t want to have families. Right now, it’s the middle of Autumn, and it gets colder than usual. Much colder.
Right now, some leaves have already fallen, but a girl on another branch that I love hasn’t fallen yet. When my Grandma fell, I cried the entire night after, and cried harder when another leaf fell by my window. The next morning, I saw that the girl I loved had fallen, and that just made me cry more.

I hate seeing other leaves fall, and I wish I could reach out and help them, but I can’t.
Now I’m the only leaf left. I always thought it would be fun, being able to do whatever I wanted with no one telling me what to do, but it’s not. It’s no fun at all. It seems much colder and quieter without anyone else. I won’t be able to stand it much longer knowing that everyone I love has fallen. But if I let go now, I don’t know what will happen to me.
I’ve decided to fall. I’m too lonely hanging in this tree all alone. Right before I fall, I wonder what will happen. I wonder if everyone will be waiting for me, and we can be a family again without the worry of falling. Then, I just fall. I remember screaming, but then slowing down as the wind catches me. Then when I hit the ground after what seemed like hours, everyone was around me and hugging me, including the girl I loved. I’ll tell her my secret later.

In case you haven't noticed, this is a story i made about being the last leaf in a tree

Answer 1

Who cares???? What is your question??? Leaf me Alone if you
don't have a question.

Answer 2

YOU ARE A VERY CREATIVE WRITER!!!
I am very impressed!! Serious!! I thought that was very very good, and I would like to read the "rest of the story". What happens after where you ended? Was this tree in a park or a Private yard where someone would be coming around with a rake and raking all the fallen leaves up? Where would they be put? In a pile in a yard where many children would run and jump onto them. How would they react to that? Would they scatter and pray for a wind to catch them and whisk them away to another area where they could land on the cool grass and just remain there until the first snow blankets them with a white cold layer and slowly crumble under the weight of additional snows and freezes, until they slowly start to feel themselves absorbed back into mother earth and the soil, and then turn into food for a nearby tree to help it grow and they can become a part of it;growing and forming into new leaves to begin a new life again.

Gee, I almost wrote the whole last half of your story myself!! But, I would rather hear your version of it!! Email me with it! I really would like to read any other stories you have too!!!
Great Job!!!!

Answer 3

Well, leaves that fall aren't more than 1 year old, and leaves grow from trees, not from each other. So, your grandmother wasn't another leaf. And, leaves don't have windows.

Other than the numerous biological and logical errors in your story, there's not much to it.

Answer 4

its a great story but i dont think anyone will want to read a story about a tree

Answer 5

That's a good story and it shows symbolism of being in life scared of death and scared to lose people! good story!

Answer 6

It's suitable for a kid's book. Go for it.

Answer 7

hahaha, im sorry honey, but your just wastin time!