A poem written by an ILLEGAL ALIEN from Mexico!?

Question

I come for a visit, get treated like a king, so I stay, who cares if I am illegal. Cross the border poor and broke, take a bus, to visit customs...what a joke!. Nice man treat me good in there, say I need to see IRS man, get SS# for benefits, then I go to welfare woman. She say you no need to come down here no more, we send cash to door. Welfare checks, they make me wealthy. Medicare, it keeps you healthy. By and by, I got plenty money. Thanks to American working dummy. Write to friends in Motherland, tell them to come as fast as you can. They come in bus and chevy trucks, I buy big house with welfare bucks. They all come, we live together. Some say they no like the weather. Fourteen families all move in, neighbors patience growing thin. Finally white guy moves away, I buy his house and then I say, find more aliens, house I rent, in the garden I put a tent. Send for family, they just trash, but they all draw more welfare cash. Everything is much good, soon we own da neighborhood.

We have hobby, its called breeding, welfare pay for baby feeding. Kids need dentist? Wife need pills? We get free, we got no bills. American crazy, he pay all YEAR, to keep the welfare running here. We think America damn good place, too damn good for white man race. If they dont like us they can go.... lots of ROOM in Mexico!

Answer 1

Ok nice poem--I found one too

I don't want to go to Mexico


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I don't want to go to Mexico


No more, more, more.
There's a big fat policeman


At my door, door, door.

He grabbed me by the collar,


He made me pay a dollar,
I don't want to go to Mexico


No more, more, more.

NOTE: This rhyme was first recorded (to my knowledge) in a Hispanic neighborhood of Chicago in 1987.

Answer 2

ok so where is the immigration question in here? shouldn't this be in the poetry section? i wish everyone would just stick to the subject in here.and if i'm not mistake you are one of the ones who whines and complains when the princess imposter posts her poetry.nice to know she inspired you to follow in her virtual footsteps.

Answer 3

If the author is really Mexican then that's sad. The broken English resembles a Germanic language, not Mexican.

Oh, by the way...this is not even a poem, it's just prose...poorly written prose. A poem has to be separated into stanzas and have some sense of order to it...not that it has to rhyme, but there needs to be a definite style or organization.

Answer 4

Honestly who wrote this?

In any event...

This poem (if it can be called that) just highlighted all the reasons why I will never support illegal immigrants.

Answer 5

you sound as if your making fun. laugh now. 3 months a go a Mexican family we thought was legal got a visit from immigrations. now they are gone. the land and house is up for sale. people don't want to buy. it looks like s hit, run down.

Answer 6

Sad but true. Only, if all us whites took over Mexico, the flow would just reverse in a few years.

Answer 7

actually as far as poetry goes...you got talent
the poem reflects todays society and is edgy.
I like it

Answer 8

Not bad, actually it's a good poem that pretty much tells it like it is. Can you find one or write one that gives a good solution?

Answer 9

Ive seen this before,revised to fit different nationality's.

Answer 10

great. now, theres ummm minus one job for an actual citizen. thats if you even employed. but besides that, its a pretty good poem. i saw it in an email bout 3 years ago.