i wrote thi yesturday...it sounds better with my guitar and i even put in some piano riffs. i want to give to this girl i like. tell me how i is. honestly, okay?!
"Saving Scripts"
Please please
come save me, save me from november fall
I'll take it all just for you
you stand beneath the trees
so that no one sees your beautiful eyes
you might not know they're blue
but always know i do
(chorus)
so please (please)
consider me the perfect light
and please (please)
consider me just for one night
i'll wait and i'll wait
for you'll wait until next fall
(end of chorus)
jelousy it won't break me
the leaves that sway just everday
and we step on until they're gone
your eyes so blue yeah so blue
(chorus)
so that one script that you can read
for you i'll wait
for you i'll wait
consider it
consider it
november's gone
and i'll wait......hello
do you like it at all???!!! it makes no sense without music.
2006-11-08 12:36:30 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
i think its so romantic!!! i wish sumone would do that for me! just dont recite it in public, she might be shy!
2006-11-08 12:42:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
When you make the song for her, you can sing and play in your own video like an idea of MTV. So that I'm sure she will real love to see you your performance. I made my poems and I real want to play in video, however, I don't have money to buy my own camera. But I can save my money to buy camera for myself. Smile, me.
2006-11-08 12:50:37 · answer #2 · answered by lovebearrhyme2003 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a bit weak man, its a good idea to write a song, but make sure it has some serious content in it other that her blue eyes and a one night stand
2006-11-08 12:41:59 · answer #3 · answered by HILL BILLY CUSTOMS 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is so romantic. I like it. It would take me years just to make up a sentence of a song.
2006-11-08 12:40:17 · answer #4 · answered by DOG 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, but my opinion matters not. That's very sweet of you to write a song for her. She should be happy about it and if she's not then forget her.
2006-11-08 12:39:41 · answer #5 · answered by miss m. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm trying to be gentle here - if it doesn't make any sense without music (your words, not mine,) than it isn't going to make any sense WITH music.
2006-11-08 12:39:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is perfect but when you sing it to her play it with music please
it is sooo sweet. she will love it
2006-11-08 12:40:14 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think she will like it. Unless she's too cool to have guys singing songs to her.
2006-11-08 12:39:16 · answer #8 · answered by synapse 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its great except maybe you used to many pleases other than that its great.
2006-11-08 12:40:34 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Man! You'll be famous one day!
2006-11-08 12:39:18 · answer #10 · answered by HAPPY <3 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋