check my rap yalll!!!!!?

Question

Beef? i handle mine, when i get my hands on nines, like a famous person i shine, except with me its with my grind, sellin crack and packin the mac, puttin snitches down on they backs. Girls screamin my name like ladies relax! you all gonna get ya turn, like usher, let it burn! i say when im rollin my blunts, puttin a hurtin on fine ladies K u n t s.
I got yellow diamonds in my ears, call them lemon heads, lemon red, iced out like winnipeg. I break ya leg, more than tipsy, consumed half a keg me and my homie craig, from the east side, where we ride, and yall cowards hide when i come through on the block, nah im not a commercial artist like young joc, i keep it real, i keep tha deal, not with interscope but with the streets, where we packin the heat, cookin up raw, meat on the grill, your blood will spill if ya snitch from me, you'll end up in the ditch from me. Listen to what i say, get rich from me, sellin drugs, bumpin mugs, on paroll since 1994 i commit the crimes...

yeah i sell crack on tha block from time 2 time..i wanted to giv a shot at rappin..obviasly u aint no **** bout it, but sinse u so good at dis, lemme see u do better?

i aint sayin im pac or anythin, im just a guy from tha streets, takin a break from the hustle tryin his flow at rap, see if i can make a bit more or betta money then c-r-a-c-k, my friends said im rpetty good, so im seein what yall think. i expect ta git bogus comments from yall, cuz ya like what..40 years old and into listenin to bethoven?

Answer 1

dont pay attention 2 da hater papa if music is what u luv pursue it PERIOD!!! regardless of what anyone says...and as a music enthusiast, myself, I'd mos def say u got skills papi so handle urs and stay on ur grind...i wouldnt do the crack thing tho hun its kind of dangerous but I'm not knockin ya hustle!!!!!


WOOOOW oh boi above me called u ccuz hahaahahaahahaah

Answer 2

Wow that's the funniest joke I've heard all day. You should stick to your day job (selling crack i assume), because you suck as a rapper.

Actually you dumbazz crackhead I'm 24 and in the Rap and Hip Hop music business. I know talent, and I know what people want to hear and it's not you. So you can stereotype me all you want, but that doesn't change the fact that you suck.

Try this on for size:
"See me riding real slick n thick and rolling on thangs
Got the misses and the b****es wanna know my name
They want to know what I'm on
Get the **** up out of mine homie go on and get your own
Riding trick with the cherry wood grain
In my big boy truck with the candy paint
Why, b****es giving me brain
I know you want to ball like me but you can't
Stay the f*** up out my business man"

Answer 3

you're pretty good, I like it i would just work on your flow then try and match it to the beat. good job tho

haters are just jealous!

Answer 4

It's allright but not tight, keep your day job cuzz'

Answer 5

thats really really good, better than what i can do.