What do you think of this poem that I wrote?

Question

I know I said I loved you
But I've changed my mind
After receiving that unexpected call
I had no choice but to leave you behind
These rekindled feelings
Have ignited a flair
You have a special place in my heart
But you could never compare
I miss her glowing smiles
Her whispers and moans
So if you don’t see me tonight
You’ll know which path I’ve chosen
I wish you the best
With whatever you do
It’s time that I move on
And I’m afraid it won’t be with you

Answer 1

It's a great poem but I sure feel sorry for the receiver.

Answer 2

Excellent!

Answer 3

And with those words you've spoken
she'll that you're a jerk;
But, In my humble opinion,
your writing needs some work!

Answer 4

excellent, hoever if this has a propose other than just writing it then you might want to consider the person and how they would feel at the sight of this poem

Answer 5

I don't think that it can be clasified as a poem mate, there is not an awfull lot of rhyming going on

Answer 6

It's a good poem, however I think it would be best to tell her in person.

Answer 7

well the poem is certainly very good....great job!!!I will feel bad for the receiver

Answer 8

YO THIS IS HOT I GUESS WE GOIN THROUGH THE SAME THANG I FEEL YA THOUGH. IF ITS IIGHT WITCHA IMA SEND THIS 2 DA GURL IM WIT NOW BUT KEEP DOIN YA THANG. DO YA GOT MYSPACE?

Answer 9

I love it! What a cute way to hurt someone's feelings!

Answer 10

I think you have talent and I think your heart has been broken and I hope you find the happiness you seek..