I am an image consultant and need a witty question for my ad. It will be posed to affluent men prompting them to purchase my services for their wives. The services are: body type analysis, closet sweep, partner shopping and celebrity photo shoots. For more info see website: www.coachinspire.com
Thank you.
2006-11-07 06:17:21 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Business & Finance ➔ Advertising & Marketing ➔ Other - Advertising & Marketing
Would you like to come home to a new wife?
It's like sleeping with somene new, except you're not cheating.
When the guys see her photo in your wallet, do they stare?
2006-11-07 06:29:20 · answer #1 · answered by Celtic Rebel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Perhaps your ad might say,
"You need a Barber, a Caddie, a Valet, a Secratary, a Mechanic and a Broker. What does your Wife deserve more than a Spa Day? Get here started today with a Personal Coach."
or
"Who can inspire your Wife more than your Nanny?"
or
"Who does your Wife turn to?"
2006-11-07 18:03:53 · answer #2 · answered by Ronnie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all, congratulations on your concept! I love the idea, and am wondering what you are doing to market yourself. One quick suggestion, based on an extremely cursory review of your site, is that you move the following paragraph from your "About" page to your home page...because I had to REALLY want to go there to understand exactly what you do. Either move this, or add similar language to your home page, so that your visitors do not have to guess what you're all about!
"INSPIRATION
Founder Jandi Girard was inspired by the vast void of education in relationships, dating and positive self-image. With all the math and science education required, there were no courses offered about relating, a primary factor in our lives. Girard became passionate about sharing information and coaching clients to unlearn myths and false assumptions and discover and implement healthy skills which are essential for having successful and fulfilling relationships."
As for your question, you might want to hearken back to the fairy tales with something like: "Are you still her Prince Charming...or does it seem like she's waking up next to a frog these days?" Follow that with some language about the more beautiful and desireable he makes her feel, the more she will reciprocate that to him, and the better their relationship (including sex) will be.
Would love to see the final campaign you wind up using. Please e-mail me at lorsini@mindspring.com and let me know how it goes!
2006-11-07 15:27:50 · answer #3 · answered by IMakeWordsEasy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Have you ever seen a florist ad that showed different sized bouquets and simply asked "Exactly how mad is she?"
Okay you don't want to infringe on copywrites, but it is old enough that you can tweak it and make it your own.
Show your different packages and perhaps ask: "Just how much trouble do you need to get out of?"
that was just one off the top of my head, it's best to think of 20 different ways to say something before you choose one and go to press with it. Keep that in mind for whatever answer you decide you like -write it as many different ways as you can first!
Good luck!
2006-11-07 18:57:23 · answer #4 · answered by daisyk 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Want to help your wife with the holidays or do you want me to? Call xxx-xxxx
2006-11-07 20:37:12 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋