I'm sorry for being in your presence
I'm sorry for walking in your direction
I'm sorry for even existing
Perhaps I'm deserving of your dismissing
For I'm nothing but a ******* eyesore
Juxtaposed against the beautiful
At least this razor goes beneath the surface
Much deeper than you would ever go
So go and fondle that player's ego
Make him feel like a ******* king
While my sincere attempts get vetoed
With the most lethiferous of stings
Why... do... I... even... bother?
When each attempt only sets me back farther
Running this gauntlet of constant rejection
Would steer any man in this direction
I am just a worthless reject
I am just an also-ran
In this competition for your love
Thus, my libido stays locked in prison
Looking at lovers locking lips
Lacerates my lens
And seeing that I may never experience it
Makes my heart descend
Another bottle shatters like my psyche
Another tear falls to the floor
Forming an emotional oasis
Until I feel deserted once more
(CHORUS)
2006-11-07 05:33:39 · 15 answers · asked by Dawn of Darkness 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
no
2006-11-07 05:35:08 · answer #1 · answered by janicajayne 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
At first it seemed like u were tryin to win ur girl back but at the end u just seem very depressed. I hope u can make it a little more cheerful.
2006-11-07 13:44:37 · answer #2 · answered by abcde_s 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
ithink they're pretty cool. It would need a good tune though. Is this like screaming death stuff? Because then it's a little weird.
2006-11-07 13:37:05 · answer #3 · answered by DBCrower 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
there very diffrent but there good theres alot of meaning. my friend used to write stuff like that and then read them to me so there good sorry if none of that makes since
2006-11-07 13:40:19 · answer #4 · answered by ec_card_10 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
No! Way too depressing! Why are you putting yourself down like that?
2006-11-07 13:38:14 · answer #5 · answered by nonya 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
yea its nice i hope ur not feeling this way because if so thay is bad!!!!
2006-11-07 13:37:08 · answer #6 · answered by TIA 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
well its kinda
shakespeer in the 2007..lol
loved it!and enjoyed it
2006-11-07 13:36:54 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
i think think that they are expressing you and how you really feel about something
2006-11-07 13:38:18 · answer #8 · answered by sami-joe 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
i right lyrics of my own and i sing! as a vocalist i think your lyrics were different but good!
2006-11-07 13:36:14 · answer #9 · answered by ♪ GodsMelody ♪ 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
yes it has the emotion i was feeling when i was single... i love it.
2006-11-07 13:36:27 · answer #10 · answered by keeshafergusonjohns 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
hmm, not my type of music, I'm more hip hop & R&B, sometimes rap
2006-11-07 13:36:08 · answer #11 · answered by ~Pitbull 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋