You say you will love me
If I have to go
You'll be thinking of me
somehow I will know
Someday when I'm lonely
wishing you weren't so far away
Then I will remember
Things we said today
You said you'll be mine, girl
'til the end of time
These days such a kind girl
seems so hard to find
Someday when we're dreaming
deep in love, not a lot to say
Then we will remember
Things we said today
Me I'm just the lucky kind
Love to hear you say that love is love
And though we may be blind
Love is here to stay and that's enough
To make you mine, girl
be the only one
loves me all the time, girl
we'll go on and on
Some day when we're dreaming
deep in love not a lot to say
Then we will remember
Things we said today
Me I'm just the lucky kind
Love to hear you say that love is love
And though we may be blind
Love is here to stay and that's enough
To make you mine, girl
believe only one
loves me all the time, girl
we'll go on and on
Some day when we're dreaming
deep in love not a lot to say
Then we will remember
Things we said today
2006-11-07 03:40:41 · 19 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
alright i got a confession...yall are makin me fel real uilty here. this is a beatles song. i cheated. and now i am full of shame. but yes ..what a song huh????
2006-11-07 03:47:35 · update #1
youre funny, posting someone else's song to see what others think, seems you did a good job too from the responses...
2006-11-09 09:07:59 · answer #1 · answered by MidnightSkies 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Since you put this in the dating section and not the writing section I won't rip it with a full critic. (I write lyrics and poetry) A true critic is not a pretty thing.
It has nice form, the premise is sweet.
Work on the verbiage a little bit add more imagery.
Keeps the attention of the listener.
Don't worry so much about rhyming and keep a rhythm.
The rhythm brings them in especially if this is for a loved one and you will be singing/reciting it.
You obviously have deep thoughts. Keep working this until it is perfect. and "YOU"
Good start.
2006-11-07 03:50:46 · answer #2 · answered by Kaustaub 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet, i would love to hear it with the music, for now its a great poem, your pretty deep man whos the lucky lady
2006-11-07 03:43:51 · answer #3 · answered by Im that girl! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That song is awesome!You should write songs and start a band,or you could go on Google and search for Talent search.
2006-11-07 03:43:21 · answer #4 · answered by Destiny 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww... thats cute. i wish i could write songs and things like that!!
i've never been in love before so i have no idea what it feels like, the song is good though...
keep it up!!
2006-11-07 03:43:57 · answer #5 · answered by Awesome girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-15 11:52:19 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's a really good, deep song. I like it, it's sweet.
2006-11-07 03:42:34 · answer #7 · answered by Ariella 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awww! It's so sweet!!! If I had a song sung to me like that I would cry.
2006-11-07 03:43:58 · answer #8 · answered by fruit salad 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad at all, reminds me of a BonJovi tune. Good luck in all you do.
2006-11-07 03:44:47 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
honeslty
the words just spoke just rite to my heart n they r very emaningful
very luvly lyrics
keep using ur talents cuz it kan take u places ayt
2006-11-07 03:44:08 · answer #10 · answered by brawneyedempress 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋