This is my report, please check if there are any grammar mistakes, thankyou!
The reason I chose “frog” for my subject is because I want to do something different from others. I know Christina chose “mosquito” for her subject and Naomi chose “ladybug” for her subject, so I thought it would be more interesting if we all have different subjects, also we could learn different things. There is also another reason why I chose “frog” for my subject. When I was little I usually like to go to the aquarium with my dad, and I often saw frogs. When I shout at when, they pretend not to hear me; they just sit there acting like they are deaf (or maybe they are real deaf), I got mad when they ignore me, so I hit them and then at jumped on my hand, I felt disgusting, from that time, my head are always thinking about frog, this is another reason I chose “frog ” for my subject!
2006-11-03 19:47:10 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
I found some mistakes. I hope this helps.
The reason I chose “frog” for my subject is because I wanted to do something different from other people. I know Christina chose “mosquito” for her subject, and Naomi chose “ladybug” for her subject. I thought it would be more interesting if we all have different subjects to learn different things. The second reason I chose “frog” for my subject refers to when I was younger. When I was little I usually liked to go to the aquarium with my dad, and I often saw frogs. When I shouted at them they pretend not to hear me; they just sit there acting like they are deaf (or maybe they are really deaf). I got mad when they ignored me, so I hit them and they would jump on my hand. I felt disgusting! Since that day I continued to think about frogs.
2006-11-03 19:58:51 · answer #1 · answered by truth hurts 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
you mad mistakes in these lines---
When I shout at when( what kind of sentence it is!!), they pretend not to hear me; they just sit there acting like they are deaf (or maybe they are real deaf), I got mad when they ignore me(either use get or use ignored), so I hit them and then at jumped on my hand, I felt disgusting, from that time, my head are("my head are" is wrong ) always thinking about frog, this is another reason I chose “frog ” for my subject!
2006-11-04 04:06:44 · answer #2 · answered by kavita b 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When I shout at when? I didn't get that part. In between When I was little I usually like to go to the aquarium with my dad, and I often saw frogs. and they pretend not to hear me; they just sit there acting like they are deaf (or maybe they are real deaf). Please make it more clearer, otherwise, you did a pretty good job! Rock on!
2006-11-04 05:19:24 · answer #3 · answered by meganqliu 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all, you don't need to preceed a conjunction like "and" with a comma...and here are the bulk of your grammatical mistakes:
I shout at -when-(?), they pretend not to hear me; they just sit there acting like they are deaf (or maybe they are -real-(really?) deaf)-,-(;) I got mad when they ignore(d) me, so I('d) hit them and then -at-(when they) jumped on my hand, I felt disgust-ing-(ed), from that time(on), my -head-(mind) -are-(was) always thinking about frog(s),(.) (T) -t-his is another reason I chose “frog(s) ” for my subject(topic)!
2006-11-04 03:56:41 · answer #4 · answered by wetdreamdiver 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
there's no help needed with your english it pretty well perfect except for just a few blimps
2006-11-04 03:56:46 · answer #5 · answered by srracvuee 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry I am not a teacher...
2006-11-04 03:54:18 · answer #6 · answered by qdrama1956 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i didn't find any mistakes
2006-11-04 03:50:09 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nope...should be alright...
2006-11-04 03:57:06 · answer #8 · answered by m 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
..ugh!...user!
2006-11-04 04:01:09 · answer #9 · answered by kosh.was.here. 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋