I love you
Its true
I really do,
Your hair
Yor hips'
and those lucious lips
I would die for you, any day
but first I would like to hear you say,
I do
Until the day I die
I'll love you forever and ever
and I'll do what needs, to be done,
I'll kiss you
I'll hug you
and protect you from danger
I'll never let you get harmed by a stranger
So please dont worry or cry,
but promise me you'll never say good bye.
2006-11-02 11:30:32 · 24 answers · asked by steven beck 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
You might be a poet and not know it. I have not seen this particular style before. Sounds like you are girded up to circle the wagons, but sometimes in relationships, the beloved becomes the "stranger". You might want to add a line about trying to not let this happen. Keep on rhymin' on!
2006-11-02 11:35:17 · answer #1 · answered by oatie 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
U wanna know what i think? That is the most romantic poem eva! Whoever you give that to i am sure that person will love you! Well i least i hope so! BUt good luck with any relations or stuff like that. I am not trying to be the top answer but i really like that poem it is gorgeuos, remarkable outstanding! good bye
P.S Who is that poem for? Not to be snotty or stuff just curios!
2006-11-02 11:38:16 · answer #2 · answered by ♥ღ...∂αηg3яσυѕℓу ιη ℓσν3...ღ♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was a really good poem except gor line 2. That's like every women's ideal self written vows for a wedding.
2006-11-02 11:35:04 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's okay, but kind of generic and uninspiring. I don't really feel it. Indulge my senses, evoke my tears, something. Read some really good love poetry, Shakespeare's sonnets, i.e., let that perculate, get a good thesaurus and try again.
2006-11-02 11:35:33 · answer #4 · answered by inquiringmind 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Yeah the poem is really sweet and I bet who ever the person you are giving it to will love it.
2006-11-02 11:34:45 · answer #5 · answered by Pink 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Awwww! I love it! It's so sweet! Dude, if any guy ever gave me a poem like that, I'd be unbelievably happy.
I really like it!
2006-11-02 11:33:01 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Very nice poem, Honey!
Sweet, simple, expressive & endearing....
2006-11-02 11:33:24 · answer #7 · answered by Jennewren :) 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
From a literary viewpoint, it's really not that good. From a feminist viewpoint, it definitely blows.
2006-11-02 11:33:56 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
I wish I could right like that
2006-11-02 11:32:53 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I give it a 6.5 one 1-10 but don't know your gal she may love it.
2006-11-02 11:32:32 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋