Dear XXXX
I would like to follow up on our explosion-drawings of October 10th. Please review the attachment for further/updated explosion-drawings we have prepared. We look forward to your commend and see if the drawings can meet your request. Thanks for your time and reviewing.
Peter
2006-11-02 11:12:53 · 3 answers · asked by Hank Wu 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Following-up Letter (Please correct the following letter or sentences if there is any mistake) ..thanks!!?
Dear XXXX
I would like to follow up on our explosion drawings of October 10th. Please review the attachment to see the updated explosion drawings we have prepared. We look forward to your comments and learning whether or not they meet your needs. Thanks for your time and consideration.
2006-11-02 11:18:44 · answer #1 · answered by David S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ok here ya go...
explosion-drawing should not be hyphenated--->should be just explosion drawing...
commend should be comments...
The last two sentences would sound better like this: We look forward to your comments and hope the drawings meet your request. Thank you for taking the time to review our submission.
Hope this helps! :)
2006-11-02 11:22:11 · answer #2 · answered by peachy78 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Please find attached the requested explosion-drawings of October 10th. Please review at your convenience and advise if the drawings meet your expectations. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
XXXXXX
2006-11-02 11:19:54 · answer #3 · answered by Linda S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋