my imperfections are gushing thorugh my broken vein I wanted u to see my perfection my beauty and grace but instead i tried to stop my shallow blood from reaching my face so here i am naked and bare take me as I am my love because no more can i fake my true blood is gushing down my perfect face hear me proud har me true My imperfections can be found in you
2006-11-02 00:45:37 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
what do u think this poem conveys
2006-11-02 00:46:06 · update #1
it doesnt matter if its good or bad....a lot of people will think and say a lot of things.
What matters is what YOU think. I know this doesnt make sense now, coz clearly, at this point of time you're looking for approval and opinion. But I hope someday it does.
2006-11-02 00:50:56 · answer #1 · answered by wrinkled soul 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very touching poem. Do some revisions to make it more musical. Some suggestions I'm out of breath from the race called youth its made my bones ache and tears run dry The flowers you gave, withered and died, my bag of hope still eludes me the lies I've told have claimed their toll in youth I was strong and brave and now I wait, for the angel to pass by hope's grave the world, once loved betrayed me and now I welcome death's angel Just some recommendations. Make sure, before you send the poem to put it on spell check. Well done, and good luck
2016-05-23 16:18:03 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A bad EMO song.
2006-11-02 00:47:07 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Reformat then go for it.Goodluck
2006-11-02 00:48:58 · answer #4 · answered by jacky 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well im going to be hones gurl but dont get mad of any hard feelings NO !!!!!!!
2006-11-02 00:49:19 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sweet...you've got nothing to lose by entering it!
2006-11-02 00:46:53 · answer #6 · answered by femaledrillsergeant 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice you should enter
2006-11-02 00:48:11 · answer #7 · answered by ntu 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
go for it
2006-11-02 00:47:30 · answer #8 · answered by INC0GNIT0 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
go for it. never know unless you try.
2006-11-02 00:50:22 · answer #9 · answered by Tired Old Man 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋