Why feed you words of intimacy and compassion?
When you yourself are beyond the meaning of words.
Many spend fortunes upon treasures made of this world.
Why do that when you yourself are beyond this world and any treasure that lays upon it.
Know, you yourself are a treasure, a gem that sparkles brightly and lights up the deep depths of the hearts of man.
The sound of your voice is peaceful like the soft whispers of the ocean at night.
Lord knows just being able to call you my own, is a Godly blessing within itself.
2006-10-31 14:35:13 · 19 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I wasn't gonna do this cuz I like to be nice, but since you have so many ladies swooning, I figure this won't bother you. I have to be honest, I would think you were a lousy poet, but that is just my opinion,... obviously. You go! I bet she'll cry.
2006-10-31 14:46:19 · answer #1 · answered by crct2004 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Enjoy it while it lasts. Guys fall in love quickly and they fall out of love quickly. He may not feel that way in a few months. I've had guys bend over backwards and said stuff more romantic than that but it's just a phase and you'll learn to not trust it completely until he still says it after you've been together for a few years. Sometimes it's just infatuation, sometimes it's so heartfelt that you can't ever see them wanting to leave you or visa versa but then reality hits in a few months or years. The poem sounds pretty cheesy and those words (gems, treasures, ocean, sparkles, whispers) he uses are corny. Sounds like he's trying too hard to be romantic and it sounds unnatural and strained. I think he meant to say "passion" not "compassion". Sorry it's cheesy.
2006-10-31 14:54:11 · answer #2 · answered by lea 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He must love you very much. That is beautiful. You are so fortunate to have found each other. Cherish the poem and the man.
2006-10-31 14:37:56 · answer #3 · answered by notyou311 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice, what does it say to you is the question, and do you feel the same for him? i am personally not one who goes crazy over words, men can say anything especially if they are smooth, so it is the actions that really get me. God bless
2006-10-31 14:37:02 · answer #4 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
CAN YOU SAY SA-WOON!!! cute, love it and adorble... but it is true that you don't really give this to someone that you don't really know. It's a little personal, but beautiful none the less.
2006-10-31 14:52:56 · answer #5 · answered by obcrazi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ohmygosh ^.^ I'd tear up, call him a butt munch for making me feel bad about not being able to write something like that to him (cuz Melis + poetry = don't mix) then kiss him for a very very very long time >.<
2006-10-31 14:46:28 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you were my husband, boyfriend or dear friend, thank you so kindly. Any others, it is too much and the woman will be frightened.
2006-10-31 14:37:49 · answer #7 · answered by tiafromtijuana 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would feel cherished, and I'd let that guy know how blessed I am to have him in my life.
2006-10-31 14:39:30 · answer #8 · answered by freedomnow1950 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it! It's calling you unique and beautiful and wonderful. But make sure he's not obsessed.
2006-10-31 14:37:33 · answer #9 · answered by lolz 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To tell you the truth, if you wrote it, you are one damn good poet :) But if you worte that about me, I would probably so happy I would cry. That is really nice. :)
2006-10-31 14:42:31 · answer #10 · answered by get_er_done 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋