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I wrote this poem, for the ones who have been hurt.

Do you really know?

Do you really know, what its like to be hurt
to have the love, you thought was so right

Taken from you, when you honestly believed
they would love you, for the rest of your life.

I believed our love would last forever,
and that I would always, be by your side.

But the love, that you once showed me,
is now a memory, burning me inside.

I gave you everything, all that I had,
my innocents’ and the love of my heart

It was your’s, and was given to you sincerely
from the day we first kissed, while walked in the park.

Do you really know, what its like to cry?
because the pain in your heart, hurts in everyway,

And it’s all because of you, and the lies that you told,
that keeps my heart from beating, on this final day.

I hope someday you will truly know, what its like to feel the pain,
from the one that you believe in, and makes you feel as low.

So today I say goodbye, to the memories I had of you,
and someday you to will ask, “ Do You Really Know”

By: Kenny P. aka Cobra

2006-10-30 11:20:11 · 12 answers · asked by Cobra 5 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

12 answers

I really love that poem!! It is so amazing, it reminds me of what i'm going through rite now. I wish that the guy could read it so he'd really kno what i feel like. the poem is WONDERFUL!!!

2006-10-30 11:28:44 · answer #1 · answered by Kandy 2 · 1 0

Yes, I really know the pain of someone who betrayed me. I felt the same as you. I finally was able to walk away from the hurting, and I hope that someday he will also know the pain he caused me.

2006-10-30 19:23:44 · answer #2 · answered by physandchemteach 7 · 1 0

Nice poem, I think everyone can relate , Who has'nt had thier heart broken at least once

2006-10-30 19:27:13 · answer #3 · answered by Kimberly H 4 · 1 0

I like it-and I don't think they know that's why they continue to hurt people. However, one day they'll know that pain when someone does to them what they've done to so many others.

2006-10-30 19:26:25 · answer #4 · answered by Mille_D-Gurl08 3 · 1 0

Quite touching...

BUT! Hitch up your britches! Record the valuable lesson! And move on!

2006-10-30 19:24:23 · answer #5 · answered by the_pharaoh109 4 · 2 0

i didnt really read it , but you shouldnt put it on here, the internet in general, someone will steal it and claim it as their own if your not careful!

2006-10-30 19:29:10 · answer #6 · answered by Bridgette ♥ 5 · 1 0

it says everything that u feel after u break up, or when someone doesnt luv u back. loved it :D

2006-10-30 19:25:15 · answer #7 · answered by cinnamon 1 · 2 0

I like this a lot. Great job.

2006-10-30 19:23:18 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

It so beautiful. i like it because you spoke from your heart. it was cool. have you tried writing more stuff??

2006-10-30 19:41:56 · answer #9 · answered by Emidy 1 · 1 0

that's really cute. have u given it 2 anyone?

2006-10-30 19:24:01 · answer #10 · answered by Emy 3 · 2 0

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