has anyone ever told you how beautiful you are?
so beautiful and here you are with me.
from the very first I noticed, you are God's gift to of of us,
and holder of a very special key.
do people try to stop you, just to say "I love you".
you spread love with every step you take.
has anyone ever mentioned, you're a beautiful work of art?
you filled the empty chambers in my heart.
you mean no one's ever whispered,"You're nothing less than a miracle?"
well, "You're nothing less than a miracle" to me.
is it ok to tell you, that just your elegant presence, makes me want to wrap myself in thee.
2006-10-30 08:26:22 · 18 answers · asked by The "Spence" 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
ask him what what elegant means-see if he is real-and your not a work of art-and only Jesus can fulfill what he thinks you will-so till he is real with Jesus and saved-John chapter 3 he is seekin another God-but other than that its a good poem-david in Jesus the true God's amazing grace
2006-10-30 08:31:34 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cheesy..he's poem is not deep, i mean it's all about your physical attributes? work of art? I mean it's okay if your sort of vainy, or like looks in the mirror every second, if your that type of girl. But I hope she sees you as an intelectual human being as well.just a thought.
2006-10-30 08:43:30 · answer #2 · answered by hypnos 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The thought was very sweet but it's not well written but he gets an A for effort.
2006-10-30 08:35:03 · answer #3 · answered by Babs B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not to put a damper on his declaration of love. His poem seems to be a collection of chat up lines. But heh!!! he took the time. so love him back
2006-10-30 09:40:39 · answer #4 · answered by flaky 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it seems you loved this poem ecase you want to share it i love readin poems but some ae jus too personal for ou two to keep i think if you would of wrote it it wold of been best to sow it but here you are just intimitating him
2006-10-30 08:33:09 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's a very poignant declaration of love. I wouldn't call it a poem, it's prose, but written in a very sensitive and loving way. make sure you keep him.
2006-10-30 08:29:11 · answer #6 · answered by quatt47 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Does it really matter what anyone else thinks of the poem your boyfriend wrote for you?
2006-10-30 08:29:26 · answer #7 · answered by swrskitlz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
guess its better than nothing. its nice having someone that cares and does little things whether the poem sucks or not
2006-10-30 08:33:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes very sweet he must love you very much
2006-10-30 08:34:53 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hate poems
2006-10-30 08:27:42 · answer #10 · answered by R & B 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋