You're the one for me.
Your eyes are like fire on a cold winter's day
Your soul burns within me
Your touch blossoms my innermost passions
And your voice melts my heart.
You're the one for me.
You are the key to unlocking
My most sacred fantasies.
You're the one for me,
The one that wakens me
When I'm at my deepest sleep
With your passionate ways,
The one that rivets me with
Your beautiful, unique face.
You're the one for me.
You are the one that I want to share
My life, my love with for all eternity.
I will love you always and forever.
You're the one for me.
2006-10-28 15:42:01 · 11 answers · asked by kasuma_101 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
awwwww that's nice.
did you write that? you're creative.
2006-10-28 15:44:10 · answer #1 · answered by ♥heartbroken♥ 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
sounds like u removed the last line... were u the dude that was askn bout a proposal poem? anyways, im sure ull flatter the f*ck out of her, so give it to her and watch the fireworks dude, most wouldnt go thru the effort to write somethin like this for the girl they like or love or watever... if u were the same dude, then dont forget to write in ur proposal at the bottom ;)
2006-10-28 15:45:44 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
AWWWWW! How sweet! Most girls love poetry and I am one of them. She is one lucky girl to have a guy like yourself. If a guy was to write me a poem like that i would know he was worth my time b/c he actually cared enough to do that for me. If she doen't like it then well, lets just say there is something wrong with her! I'm sure she will because poetry is Soooo sweet!
Good Luck!!!
2006-10-28 15:54:04 · answer #3 · answered by beatlesgurlforever 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
What a beautiful poem, dear, delightful use of imagery and good metre
2006-10-28 15:44:12 · answer #4 · answered by kittyrogers 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
This is the best poem I've heard in a while. She will definitely love it.
2006-10-28 15:44:25 · answer #5 · answered by Question 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I want to see what you you tried to say
what you wanted to express in this special way
but reading it I just feel that
you are a nerdy geeky ****
2006-10-28 15:44:39 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Oh, it's so romantic. Hoo hoo, i'm crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, well, i suppose it's really good but i hate repeating words (not the "you are the one for me"). I hope you could find more words to replace.
Wish your relationship with you gf bloom up!
2006-10-28 15:46:06 · answer #7 · answered by Oh Dee! 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Awww...that is really sweet. I as a woman would love to receive something like this from my husband! :) It's a nice poem. She will love it!
2006-10-28 15:46:46 · answer #8 · answered by peachy78 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
WOW, plus dozen of roses ;
2006-10-28 15:45:55 · answer #9 · answered by Cindy R 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
OMG thats so cute YES YES YES i love it it would be perfict
2006-10-28 15:45:33 · answer #10 · answered by mickel 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋