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It doesn’t matter anymore.


I used to sit and wonder to myself,
what it was, I did so wrong.

Could I have treated you different?
or wrote you, a beautiful song.

I loved you with all of my heart,
and I believed, you truly loved me.

You used to say, I was your true love,
and there was no place, you’d rather be.

How could a love so wonderful and pure,
change, from the day we first met.

Was it I, who did you wrong,
or a friend, I will never forget.

But now, it truly doesn’t matter anymore,
why, you hurt and cheated on me.

Because I know, deep in my heart,
It wasn’t I, who cheated on thee.

So I just want you to know,
that if you ever, think of us two.

My life was truly changed, my dear,
and I deserve, a lot better than you.



By: Kenny P aka- Cobra

2006-10-28 15:03:03 · 12 answers · asked by Cobra 5 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

12 answers

Bravo! You got the lesson from this one! Your poem is beautiful and very tender. You are right, you deserve a lot better. Let go and move on. Dealing with betrayal is always painful, however, we never lose in life what we are meant to have. There is someone out there better for you. Now, how would I feel? Hurt, betrayed and ready to act on the saying "love knows know wrath like that of a woman scorned!" That would be the initial pain and anger. As the rage calmed, the rational side would come to know that we can't make others love us, we can't control their actions and we can't control their feelings. If they want to be with someone else then they should go. I would not fight to hold but release freely, for love is not a possession, it is a gift we give to others. I would know that there would be someone else in life who would appreciate my loyalty and the gift of my love. I would also know that I lived before this person arrived in my life and I would be fine again in my own company. I would then nurture my soul at a spa with a nice scented massage, a candle light dinner and anything else that made me feel special!

2006-10-28 15:37:46 · answer #1 · answered by Wise Woman 1 · 2 0

It was awful, and now we are getting a divorce. He made me feel worthless i lost 21/2 stone in weight dropped from a size 10 to a size 6 and then that was still to big i am now wearing cloths for aged 10/11, I still have days when i cant go out side as i hate the thought of people talking about me. My confidence and self esteem went through the floor. I felt ugly and useless. 6 months on i am slowly putting on the weight it is hard some days my children help though my soon makes sure i eat and also encourages me to go outside, i have recently met someone, i wasnt looking and it did take me by surprise he is helping me, always compliments me tells me he loves me he makes me feel like a goddess. He is helping me learn to trust again. It will be a long time before i am the person i want to be but one thing i know is i will be that person. My wedding anniversary is coming up soon and i am going to have a tattoo done (it wont be visible to the public) i want something to mark the occasion something to say this is the new me and today is the first day of my new life

2016-05-22 04:24:11 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I believe that is the ultimate betrayal between a man and woman. You summed it up though! Very nice poetry.

2006-10-28 15:08:11 · answer #3 · answered by jennifer c 3 · 2 0

How touching. I am sorry you had to go through this, but you came out a much better person than she did.

2006-10-28 15:04:19 · answer #4 · answered by physandchemteach 7 · 1 0

I am sorry that you went throught this life altering experience. Know that you will get through it and that there is someone out there for you (I know it is easier said than done).

2006-10-28 15:05:12 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

I will feel crushed and hurt and by the way i like your poem

2006-10-28 15:07:07 · answer #6 · answered by N/A 2 · 2 0

ok, look, your poems are great, but no one wants to hear them. take them to an open mic night or something. this place is for questions and answers. not some place to trick people into reading your poetry.

2006-10-28 15:05:47 · answer #7 · answered by redpeach_mi 7 · 0 2

i would feel betrayed.

that's a beautiful song/poem btw, man

2006-10-28 15:05:27 · answer #8 · answered by Youngling 4 · 2 0

Dude move on from that raggedy *****. You can do so much better.

2006-10-28 15:05:59 · answer #9 · answered by ? 4 · 2 0

I hate poems

2006-10-28 15:05:16 · answer #10 · answered by R & B 5 · 1 2

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