Yesterday, I asked a (literature) teacher in my school to teach me how to write poetry.
We were in back of the library (which was empty). He wrote a quick poem as an example of a descriptive poem with me as a subject and in that poem he wrote:
Don’t see her everyday/ But would love to/ How would her embrace feel/ How would her lips, soft, silent, feel?/My dream, my beauty?
I feel very disgusted.
What should I do?
2006-10-26 03:30:42 · 10 answers · asked by strawberrysocks 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
He told me that the poem was about me.
How am I making a joke? I'm serious. I feel the poem is very innappropriate and thathe coud have used other poems as examples. I feel tottaly uncomforatble and confused about it. He even said himself that those lines were 'a bit weird'.
2006-10-26 04:18:54 · update #1
well if he's teaching you to write poetry I wouldn't worry about it to much.. but if it makes you uncomfortable don't have anymore 1 on 1s with him. Just see him in class and leave with everyone else and don't stay after class with him- if he ever asks you to stay after class to discuss anything keep a friend with you.....
2006-10-26 03:40:21 · answer #1 · answered by katjha2005 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you still have it, I would probably make a trip to the principal's office with it. It might be worth their while to take a look into this person's background and how he has acted around other students. This poem is extremely inappropriate!
2006-10-26 03:40:34 · answer #2 · answered by suzy7o7 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your making a joke out of a poem. You asked him for help what more do you want.
2006-10-26 03:38:46 · answer #3 · answered by Beth B 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Play it cool and be yourself, do not try to makea move at all. I think it is in your head and she has a life outside of school with her own age group. I sure don't want to hang out with a teeny-bopper. And you'd hate to hang out with folks that are more experienced than you, until you have more experience yourself and I mean experience in all aspect of the word ie talking politics and child birth and of passed lessons that life has taken them through, these things you know nothing about LOL!!!
2006-10-26 03:36:22 · answer #4 · answered by tracey s 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
How do you know you were the subject? Did he tell you that you were? If not, you might be a little conceded.
2006-10-26 03:38:30 · answer #5 · answered by tobcol 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
And he's teaching you how to write poetry? Run away- far away.
2006-10-26 03:34:36 · answer #6 · answered by TJD 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think ur makin a mountain out of a mole hill
2006-10-26 03:33:13 · answer #7 · answered by Farhat 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Have him arrested for bad poetry.
2006-10-26 03:33:31 · answer #8 · answered by s t 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How do you know it was about you? Did he use your name? Or are you just hoping it was about you?
2006-10-26 03:39:07 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you hot? If so, he's probably hitting on you.
2006-10-26 13:50:17 · answer #10 · answered by pilly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋