Song Title: Up, Up, and Away
Fly, If you're lovin'
Fly, If you're hatin'
Fly, If you're seekin'
Fly, If you're findin'
Fly.
(Hook)
How come people love?
How come people hate?
How come people try,
to spread their wings and fly?
It ain't gonna happen, not here,
not now, not ever
(Chorus)
Up, Up and Away,
Flyin' towards the sky,
what i thought was impossible,
is happenin', to me!
Up, Up, and Away
(Bridge)
It's happenin' here,
It's happenin' now.
Lovin'
Hatin'
Tryin'
Cryin'
Flyin'
I feel great when I'm flyin' with you
When I'm smilin', when I'm frownin'
Can't you see we're movin' upwards?
Open your eyes, now is the time to shine!
(Hook)
(Chorus)
(Bridge)
(speak to soft guitar) Shine On.
That's it....
Waht do you think...of the LYRICS NOT THE MUSIC! Thx, ♥
2006-10-25 18:57:22 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
these are like songs i wrote in a minute...i have better. lol. ill post one in a second under the same question title...look for it!
2006-10-25 19:00:42 · update #1
i like to here some criticism...thx!
2006-10-25 19:06:00 · update #2
it's not mean to critcise ppl!
2006-10-25 19:20:22 · update #3
Its nice but sorry to say it has no message,like what are u trying to say thru your song or perhaps you do have something but its not coming thru.......
2006-10-25 19:01:56 · answer #1 · answered by Heista 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My favourite music (correct now) is Hole In My Pocket by way of Sheryl Crow You can inform me the arena is circular and I'll end up to you it is rectangular You can preserve your ft at the floor, however I'll be jogging on air You're beautiful well at ready While I cross going for walks round Well, that is simply the way in which it's, you recognize I received a gap in my pocket You deliver me love and I drop it I bet I threw it away I received a gap in my pocket You deliver me love and I drop it I bet I'll throw it away I received a 4 leaf clover I'll throw it over my shoulder I'm gonna want it sooner or later o When matters do not cross correct you lead me Torn up and tied---you unfastened me When existence is unusual you're taking me Through each difference, you certainly not holiday me You received a sense there is a wall that you'll certainly not climb I you should be there in which you're, I you should be on time But I lose my method oops... practically the entire music... they're my favourite constituents, although. I bet I just like the entire music.
2016-09-01 02:52:00 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I actually like it. I think the lyrics would sound great with music. Though the "speak to soft guitar" could be kinda corny, but I'm just not a fan of that kind of thing. Other than that, good job, and good luck!
2006-10-25 19:02:02 · answer #3 · answered by mrs. vader 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
As with most songs its all in the delivery. The lyrics are simple and repetitive but most popular songs these days are. Personally I prefer lyrics with catchy yet intreguing lyrics, like the Scissor Sisters stuff... brilliant.
2006-10-25 19:07:41 · answer #4 · answered by Ben 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the truth? it sounds like another cheap, shallow yet famous pop song. I'm not trying to be a jackass, but i hope you have a nice voice and a tune to make the song somewhat concrete.
2006-10-25 19:19:33 · answer #5 · answered by Eryc 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool!!
Another songwriter.
I love people who try new stuff.
I like it.
Try adding more detail to give body.
Other than that...
It's cool...
I wrote songs too.. but they're probably the total opposite from yours......
Rock on ...
2006-10-25 19:15:26 · answer #6 · answered by Rawrnonymous 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The flow is good, just there really isn't any feeling to the words. It sounds manufactured, like it was forced.
2006-10-25 19:05:19 · answer #7 · answered by amish_renegade 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Post one a minute so we not overwhelmed.
Not bad actually, simple, clean, poetic. I will give you a thumbs up.
2006-10-25 19:06:36 · answer #8 · answered by Snaglefritz 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds great to me
2006-10-25 19:01:36 · answer #9 · answered by Classy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
itll never sell
2006-10-25 18:59:33 · answer #10 · answered by Thin Ice 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋