wat do u think it means?
how is it similar to the story "Typhoid Fever"? (Patrcia and Frank)
2006-10-25 17:58:55 · 3 answers · asked by cuteypie 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
why do they make you read that awful poem!!! (highwayman) ugh... i had to read that when i was in school.
2006-10-25 18:07:16 · answer #1 · answered by christy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Can't say I liked this one. Now if you split it and completed two separate poems, then they would be pretty good. You have no fluent transition between your two separate thoughts, Candles and Trees. You start off referring to the trees as simply a giant bundle of sticks and then go on in a wayward direction and don't really bring the thoughts together cohesively. Only the first two Stanzas refer to candles and the third stanza (which I think is your transition) needs work. The trees part just didn't make sense to me at all. Sorry, This is just my constructive criticism and not meant to be mean. If you write something that I really really like, I will tell you as I have in the past. This one just didn't do it for me.
2016-05-22 14:51:07 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I've read both of those! lol That is strange. They both are about love (if I'm remembering correctly).
2006-10-25 18:03:09 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋