Help with these sentences. I have to rewrite them correctly or put No Change if correct. What do you think?

Question

1.Each member of the sorority has to make their own bed. (Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement)
2.All students are urged to complete your registration on time. (Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement)
3.Of the two football players, Herman was the heaviest. (Adjectives and Adverbs)
4.The Autumn is my favorite Season of the year, especially in new England. (capitalization)
5.The ball spiraled through the air and landed at Rob's feet. (Comma)
6.Students, who study hard, should do well. (Comma)
7.The Mariners lost all three games to Milwaukee; worse yet; two star players were injured. (Semicolon)

Answer 1

1. Each member of the sorority has to make HER own bed. -- Personally would say 'must' rather than 'has to'. Their indicates plural so would be 'All members of the sorority have to make their own beds'. Since sorority is girls only, changing to 'her' is simplier.

2. All students are urged to complete THEIR registrationS on time. -- Or, 'Each student is urged to complete your registration on time'.

3. Of the two football players, Herman was the HEAVIER. -- Heaviest only applies if 3 or more involved.

4. Autumn is my favorite season of the year, especially in New England.

5. The ball spiraled through the air and landed at Rob's feet. -- Okay, no change needed

6. Students who study hard should do well. -- Remove all commas.

7. The Mariners lost all three games to Milwaukee; worse yet, two star players were injured. -- Replace second semi-colon with comma.

Answer 2

1. Each member of the sorority has to make her own bed.
2. All student registrations need to be completed on time.
3. Herman was the heaviest, of the two football players.
4. My favorite season of the year is Autumn, especially in New England.
5. The ball spiraled through the air, and landed at Rob's feet.
6. Students who study hard, should do well.
7. The Mariners lost all three games to Milwaukee; worst yet two star players were injured.

Answer 3

1. Each sorority member has to make their own bed.
2. All students are urged to complete their registration on time.
3. Of the two football players, Herman was the heaviest. (no change)
4. Autumn is my favorite season of the year, especially in New England.
5. The ball spiraled through the air and landed at Rob's feet (no change)
6. Students who study hard, should do well.
7. The Mariners lost all three games to Milwaukee and what's worse was that two star players were injured.

Answer 4

Here are the corrections:

1.Each member of the sorority has to make HER own bed. Since sororities are for girls, and the sentence refers to indiviual girls, you must use the singular possesive form of the pronoun.

2.All students are urged to complete THEIR registration on time. (students are plural, so you must use the plural form of the possive)

3.Of the two football players, Herman was the HEAVIER. Heavier is used when comparing two people, heaviest when comparing more than 2.

4. Autumn is my favorite season of the year, especially in new England. Here capitalize Autumn because in English, the names of days of the week, months and languages are capitalized. However, do not capitalize season because it is a common noun.

5.The ball spiraled through the air and landed at Rob's feet. This is correct. What comes after the and is not a complete sentence, so you cannot separate it from the first by a comma and a coordinating conjuntion.

6.Students who study hard should do well. This is correct without any commas because it improves the flow of the sentence. Use commas before and after a phrase when you want to emphasize it.

7.The Mariners lost all three games to Milwaukee; worse yet, two star players were injured. Here you should use a comma instead of semicolon because worse yet is not a sentence.

I hope this helps. Here are some websites you might find useful. Good luck! ;-)

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/grammar/pronante.html

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/adjectives.htm

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/adverbs.htm

http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/cnt_punc.asp

Answer 5

1.Each member of the sorority has to make her own bed. (Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement)
2.All students are urged to complete their registration on time. (Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement)
3.Of the two football players, Herman was heavier. (Adjectives and Adverbs)
4.The autumn is my favorite season of the year, especially in New England. (capitalization)
5.The ball spiraled through the air and landed at Rob's feet(Comma)
6.Students, who study hard, should do well. (Comma) (fine)
7.The Mariners lost all three games to Milwaukee; worse yet, two star players were injured. (Semicolon)

Answer 6

1.Each member of the sorority has to make his own bed.
2.All students are urged to complete their registration on time.
3.Of the two football players, Herman was the heavier.
4. Autumn is my favorite Season of the year, especially in New England.
5.The ball spiraled through the air, and landed at Rob's feet.
6.Students who study hard, should do well.
7.The Mariners lost all three games to Milwaukee; worse yet; two star players were injured.

Answer 7

Each member of the sorority has to make her own bed. 2.All students are urged to complete their registration in time. 3.of the two football players,Herman was heavier. 4.Autumn is my favorite season,especially in New England. 5.The ball spiralled through the air, and landed at Robs feet. 6.Students who study hard,should do well. 7,The mariners lost all three games to Milwaukee; worse yet,two star players were injured.

Answer 8

1.Each member of the sorority has to make her own bed, (sororities are for girls)
2.All students are urged to complete their registration...
3...Herman was the heavier
4....New England
5.the sentence is fine
6.no comma
7. ...Milwaukee. Worse yet, two star...

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Answer 9

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Answer 10

1.make his own bed.
2.their registration on time.
3.heavier.
4.New England
5.OK
6.OK