OK TELL ME WHAT YALL THINK ABOUT MY POEM PLZ!!!!
*oh and help me pick a name for my poem quick*
Thanks for always being there
for showing me that you always care
when my life isn't going right
when i felt and thought my life didnt have any purpose or hope
when i just felt i needed to get some dope
when things didnt seem fair
thanks for putting a smile on my face
for making my life a better place
when my life seems like a waste
thanks for cheering up my day
for showing me there is other ways
for always listening to everything i have to say
thanks for helping me through all my hard times
when things get rough
for listening to my problems
when i know you've heard enough
thanks for being there when i needed someone to comfort me
for helping me on everything i've been through
for being a real homie i know is true
thanks for supporting, loving, sharing, and caring about me
thanks for being my best friend til the end
copyright© 2006 AP
2006-10-25 04:26:14 · 8 answers · asked by Lil Princess 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Well I just read the answers, and I want to thank yall for reading my poem, and for giving me ideas for the tittle of my poem, thank you. =)
2006-10-25 05:19:49 · update #1
Hey...I really like your poem, It's real.
Here is a few ideas for your title.
My Life Light
Simple Truth
The Better Place Inside
Hope these will give you inspiration.
2006-10-25 04:44:04 · answer #1 · answered by Michelle b 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Fast ain't my thing. Try a crit group. You can find a crit group by going to Yahoo Groups and putting..Poetry groups in the Search slot. You can also try putting in Poetry Critique Groups. A crit group will read and crit your poem in exchange for you critting other poems and they will like poetry and understand poetry and give a crap about poetry, whereas I simple can't get excited about poetry.
2006-10-25 11:40:52 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a sweet poem! Name It Aways
2006-10-25 12:26:02 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
UNIQUE That's a good title for what you have expressed from your heart. Seems to me that your heart must have been full of all kinds of joy for the person you love. Lucky guy. It must be fun to be with you. You are so in contact with your emotions.
2006-10-25 11:39:15 · answer #4 · answered by Jayme C 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I know that it is a really simple title, but I would name it
'Thanks'
I like your poem, and it sounds like a really good frind (i wish I had one like that)
2006-10-25 11:36:04 · answer #5 · answered by Choir~Geek 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I would call it; "Chuck Norris thinks your poem sucks and want to Round-House kick it into space."
2006-10-25 11:34:17 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
LUCKY ME
I like your poem and glad you have such a good friend.
2006-10-25 11:29:50 · answer #7 · answered by beez 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i LUVED IT!!!!!! it sounds like ur soooo thankful for someone who is always there for u!!!!!- who is the poem for????- well whoever it is im sure theyll like it!!!!!!- GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!
2006-10-25 11:34:39 · answer #8 · answered by cayla_152 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋