Word changes, editing, what needs to be done to this poem?

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AN ANGEL, IN ALL WAYS
Everyday you are not with me, I feel something is missing.
My heart ripped out, and given to you.
My time spent thinking of you holding me tight until the morning light.
Don't break my heart, I won't survive without you.
You are my first true love, a love I can't resist.
Nothing can replace a moment with you.
You are always on my mind, like a reminder of why I keep trying.
I would give anything to see that smile.
If I see you in my dreams that night I know everything will be all right.
Stay by my side, without you I'd be no more for I love you more and more with each breath.
Even though I am on your leash, my heart skips a beat when I see you by my side.
Andrea you are my heart and soul.
You are the rose surrounded by thorns.
You are an angel, you are my paradise.
You are the light at the end of time.
I look into your eyes and lose track of time.
You are the one, for me.
You are the one I have always known, even before the beginning of time.
I have alot of nerve, thinking I in the least deserve you.
I loved you yesterday, I love you today, and I will love you tomorrow in every way.
In my heart I pray you stay.
Keeping me motivated, keeping me with you.
You are my angel; you are my heart and soul.
Sitting here tonight, all I can think about is you and I together forever.
The stars envy your beauty.
The sparkle in your eyes reminds me of light hitting a raindrop, just right.
Your radiant glow, reminds me of the warm glow of snow while the sun begins to rise.
The way you move, reminds me of the ebb and flow of the world's tides.
The thousand ships weren't sent to rescue Helen, I sent them for you.
You are an angel; you are my heart and soul.
You make it all worthwhile.
You and I together forever, is what I want to carve into every tree.
You make "HI" mean something; it means you are giving me the key to set me free.
I refuse to believe that you would not give me a chance.
It would be an act against nature, time, and most importantly us.
From the moment I met you, I knew you were special. One of a kind, like the one snowflake that draws you to it.

Answer 1

This poem is perfect! You speak from the heart. Any girl would be honored to have such words meant for her, especially with the warmth and love you have chosen.

Have you shown this to Andrea? It is a beautifully written piece for which you should be very proud. Good luck and keep on writing.